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* [bug#35436] Typos
@ 2019-04-26 11:20 Miguel
  2019-04-26 11:22 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 1/2] installer: Fix typo Miguel
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From: Miguel @ 2019-04-26 11:20 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: 35436

Hi!

During translation I've been founding some typos. These are the commits
to fix them.

Best regards,
Miguel

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installer: Fix typo.

* gnu/installer/newt/menu.scm (run-menu-page): Missing space after
period.
---
 gnu/installer/newt/menu.scm | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

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From 9c2f6ca367cb02e37ce325b6fa5914947d1c1d68 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 24 Apr 2019 12:39:14 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] installer: Fix typo.

* gnu/installer/newt/menu.scm (run-menu-page): Missing space after
period.
---
 gnu/installer/newt/menu.scm | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/gnu/installer/newt/menu.scm b/gnu/installer/newt/menu.scm
index 161266a94a..e153d3d756 100644
--- a/gnu/installer/newt/menu.scm
+++ b/gnu/installer/newt/menu.scm
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ process from."
             steps))
 
   (run-listbox-selection-page
-   #:info-text (G_ "Choose where you want to resume the install.\
+   #:info-text (G_ "Choose where you want to resume the install.  \
 You can also abort the installation by pressing the Abort button.")
    #:title (G_ "Installation menu")
    #:listbox-items (steps->items steps)
-- 
2.21.0


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From: Miguel @ 2019-04-26 11:22 UTC (permalink / raw)
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doc: Fix typos.

* doc/guix.texi (rakudo-build-system, libvirt-configuration,
pam-krb5): Missing period between sentences.
(gnu services vpn): Fix server spelling.
(agetty-configuration): Missing subject in the sentence.
(udev-service): Fix markup for Scheme procedures.
({gnome,xfce,mate}-desktop-service): Missing colon after default.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

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From 3bf4ba8a86fdfdc2244f92ad0899a9d7fe3fa52d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 24 Apr 2019 16:37:21 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] doc: Fix typos.

* doc/guix.texi (rakudo-build-system, libvirt-configuration,
pam-krb5): Missing period between sentences.
(gnu services vpn): Fix server spelling.
(agetty-configuration): Missing subject in the sentence.
(udev-service): Fix markup for Scheme procedures.
({gnome,xfce,mate}-desktop-service): Missing colon after default.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index 879cb562e9..46f23b9b15 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -6042,7 +6042,7 @@ are run after installation using the R function
 @end defvr
 
 @defvr {Scheme Variable} rakudo-build-system
-This variable is exported by @code{(guix build-system rakudo)} It
+This variable is exported by @code{(guix build-system rakudo)}.  It
 implements the build procedure used by @uref{https://rakudo.org/,
 Rakudo} for @uref{https://perl6.org/, Perl6} packages. It installs the
 package to @code{/gnu/store/@dots{}/NAME-VERSION/share/perl6} and
@@ -11726,8 +11726,8 @@ interpreted as backspace when the user types their login name.
 
 @item @code{kill-characters} (default: @code{#f})
 This option accepts a string that should be interpreted to mean "ignore
-all previous characters" (also called a "kill" character) when the types
-their login name.
+all previous characters" (also called a "kill" character) when the user
+types their login name.
 
 @item @code{chdir} (default: @code{#f})
 This option accepts, as a string, a directory path that will be changed
@@ -11992,7 +11992,7 @@ A directory path where the @command{guix-daemon} will perform builds.
 @deffn {Scheme Procedure} udev-service [#:udev @var{eudev} #:rules @code{'()}]
 Run @var{udev}, which populates the @file{/dev} directory dynamically.
 udev rules can be provided as a list of files through the @var{rules}
-variable.  The procedures @var{udev-rule} and @var{file->udev-rule} from
+variable.  The procedures @code{udev-rule} and @code{file->udev-rule} from
 @code{(gnu services base)} simplify the creation of such rule files.
 @end deffn
 
@@ -14611,7 +14611,7 @@ polkit with the actions from @code{gnome-settings-daemon}.
 Configuration record for the GNOME desktop environment.
 
 @table @asis
-@item @code{gnome} (default @code{gnome})
+@item @code{gnome} (default: @code{gnome})
 The GNOME package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -14631,7 +14631,7 @@ with the administrator's password.
 Configuration record for the Xfce desktop environment.
 
 @table @asis
-@item @code{xfce} (default @code{xfce})
+@item @code{xfce} (default: @code{xfce})
 The Xfce package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -14650,7 +14650,7 @@ profile, and extends polkit with the actions from
 Configuration record for the MATE desktop environment.
 
 @table @asis
-@item @code{mate} (default @code{mate})
+@item @code{mate} (default: @code{mate})
 The MATE package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -14662,7 +14662,7 @@ profile, and extends dbus with actions from @code{efl}.
 
 @deftp {Data Type} enlightenment-desktop-service-configuration
 @table @asis
-@item @code{enlightenment} (default @code{enlightenment})
+@item @code{enlightenment} (default: @code{enlightenment})
 The enlightenment package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -18002,7 +18002,7 @@ A service type for the Kerberos 5 PAM module.
 @end defvr
 
 @deftp {Data Type} pam-krb5-configuration
-Data type representing the configuration of the Kerberos 5 PAM module
+Data type representing the configuration of the Kerberos 5 PAM module.
 This type has the following parameters:
 @table @asis
 @item @code{pam-krb5} (default: @code{pam-krb5})
@@ -20016,7 +20016,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{()}.
 
 The @code{(gnu services vpn)} module provides services related to
 @dfn{virtual private networks} (VPNs).  It provides a @emph{client} service for
-your machine to connect to a VPN, and a @emph{servire} service for your machine
+your machine to connect to a VPN, and a @emph{server} service for your machine
 to host a VPN.  Both services use @uref{https://openvpn.net/, OpenVPN}.
 
 @deffn {Scheme Procedure} openvpn-client-service @
@@ -21613,7 +21613,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{"3:remote 4:event"}.
 @deftypevr {@code{libvirt-configuration} parameter} string log-outputs
 Logging outputs.
 
-An output is one of the places to save logging information The format
+An output is one of the places to save logging information.  The format
 for an output can be:
 
 @table @code
-- 
2.21.0


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* [bug#35436] [PATCH 3/3] doc: Fix typo.
  2019-04-26 11:20 [bug#35436] Typos Miguel
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  2019-04-26 11:22 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 2/2] doc: Fix typos Miguel
@ 2019-04-26 21:09 ` Miguel
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                   ` (5 subsequent siblings)
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From: Miguel @ 2019-04-26 21:09 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: 35436

doc: Fix typo.

* doc/guix.texi (openntpd-configuration): Fix spelling issues.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index 879cb562e9..b52141aec6 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -12774,7 +12774,7 @@ A list of local IP addresses or hostnames the ntpd daemon should listen on.
 A list of local IP address the ntpd daemon should use for outgoing queries.
 @item @code{sensor} (default: @code{'()})
 Specify a list of timedelta sensor devices ntpd should use.  @code{ntpd}
-will listen to each sensor that acutally exists and ignore non-existant ones.
+will listen to each sensor that actually exists and ignore non-existent ones.
 See @uref{https://man.openbsd.org/ntpd.conf, upstream documentation} for more
 information.
 @item @code{server} (default: @var{%ntp-servers})
-- 
2.21.0

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From: Miguel @ 2019-04-26 21:48 UTC (permalink / raw)
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doc: Fix typo.

* doc/guix.texi (rsync-service-type): Missing sentence.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 3 ++-
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

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From be09f73d7ca2602611d8f7f2b9294accb208a529 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 26 Apr 2019 23:46:26 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix typo.

* doc/guix.texi (rsync-service-type): Missing sentence.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 3 ++-
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index b52141aec6..d4e31ff65d 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -12965,7 +12965,8 @@ so anyone (or just yourself) can download existing files or upload new
 files.
 
 @deffn {Scheme Variable} rsync-service-type
-This is the type for the @uref{https://rsync.samba.org, rsync} rsync daemon,
+This is the service type for the @uref{https://rsync.samba.org, rsync} daemon,
+The value for this service type is a
 @command{rsync-configuration} record as in this example:
 
 @example
-- 
2.21.0


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doc: Fix typos.

* doc/guix.texi (set-xorg-configuration): Add missing @code tag.
(error-log@files-configuration@CUPS): Error log instead of access log.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

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From 4aed7fb6e12da0fd825850d0408ba92316ae4027 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 27 Apr 2019 11:23:57 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix typos.

* doc/guix.texi (set-xorg-configuration): Add missing @code tag.
(error-log@files-configuration@CUPS): Error log instead of access log.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index d4e31ff65d..51470531ec 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -13665,7 +13665,7 @@ default is @code{-nolisten tcp}.
 @deffn {Scheme Procedure} set-xorg-configuration @var{config} @
   [@var{login-manager-service-type}]
 Tell the log-in manager (of type @var{login-manager-service-type}) to use
-@var{config}, an <xorg-configuration> record.
+@var{config}, an @code{<xorg-configuration>} record.
 
 Since the Xorg configuration is embedded in the log-in manager's
 configuration---e.g., @code{gdm-configuration}---this procedure provides a
@@ -13801,7 +13801,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{"0640"}.
 
 @deftypevr {@code{files-configuration} parameter} log-location error-log
 Defines the error log filename.  Specifying a blank filename disables
-access log generation.  The value @code{stderr} causes log entries to be
+error log generation.  The value @code{stderr} causes log entries to be
 sent to the standard error file when the scheduler is running in the
 foreground, or to the system log daemon when run in the background.  The
 value @code{syslog} causes log entries to be sent to the system log
-- 
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  To: 35436

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doc: Fix typo.

* doc/guix.texi (page-log@files-configuration@CUPS): Page log instead of
access log.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

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From ecd6bbb5364b3650fbb38708db8966ca9b62519d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 27 Apr 2019 11:41:00 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] doc: Fix typo.

* doc/guix.texi (page-log@files-configuration@CUPS): Page log instead of
access log.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index 28195e2306..cfb7b8b317 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -13866,7 +13866,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{"0644"}.
 
 @deftypevr {@code{files-configuration} parameter} log-location page-log
 Defines the page log filename.  Specifying a blank filename disables
-access log generation.  The value @code{stderr} causes log entries to be
+page log generation.  The value @code{stderr} causes log entries to be
 sent to the standard error file when the scheduler is running in the
 foreground, or to the system log daemon when run in the background.  The
 value @code{syslog} causes log entries to be sent to the system log
-- 
2.21.0


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  2019-05-05 15:26 ` bug#35436: Typos Danny Milosavljevic
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doc: Fix typo.

* doc/guix.texi (xfce-desktop-service-type): Fix sentence.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

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From c224373454a6761a08e409722bb5a4e186207f18 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 27 Apr 2019 21:31:03 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] doc: Fix typo.

* doc/guix.texi (xfce-desktop-service-type): Fix sentence.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index cfb7b8b317..3971e9da7a 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -14622,7 +14622,7 @@ This is the type of a service to run the @uref{Xfce, https://xfce.org/}
 desktop environment.  Its value is an @code{xfce-desktop-configuration} object
 (see below.)
 
-This service that adds the @code{xfce} package to the system profile, and
+This service adds the @code{xfce} package to the system profile, and
 extends polkit with the ability for @code{thunar} to manipulate the file
 system as root from within a user session, after the user has authenticated
 with the administrator's password.
-- 
2.21.0


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From: Miguel @ 2019-04-29 22:57 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: 35436

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Hi,

I've squashed the patches for the manual into a single one. It would
have been great having them for the release, but we are almost there
and they are all editorial/typographic issues and probably can wait
for the next release cycle.

Best regards,
Miguel

---
doc: Minor fixes to the manual.

* doc/guix.texi (rakudo-build-system): Fix missing period.
(agetty-configuration): Fix missing subject.
(udev-service): Use @code instead of @var for Scheme procedures.
(openntpd-configuration): Fix spelling issue.
(rsync-service-type): Add missing sentence fragment.
(set-xorg-configuration): Add missing @code tag.
(cups-configuration-error-log,
cups-configuration-page-log): Fix reference to log generation.
(gnome-desktop-service-configuration,
xfce-desktop-service-configuration,
mate-desktop-service-configuration,
enlightenment-desktop-service-configuration): Fix missing colon.
(pam-krb5-configuration): Fix missing period.
(gnu services vpn): Fix spelling issue.
(libvirt-configuration-log-outputs): Fix missing period.
(Guix on a VM#qemu options): Fix missing preposition and double the.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 37 +++++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

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From 3ac088f0a36f0c135ff60763b6a1a3f3c0234791 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 30 Apr 2019 00:35:14 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] doc: Minor fixes to the manual.

* doc/guix.texi (rakudo-build-system): Fix missing period.
(agetty-configuration): Fix missing subject.
(udev-service): Use @code instead of @var for Scheme procedures.
(openntpd-configuration): Fix spelling issue.
(rsync-service-type): Add missing sentence fragment.
(set-xorg-configuration): Add missing @code tag.
(cups-configuration-error-log,
cups-configuration-page-log): Fix reference to log generation.
(gnome-desktop-service-configuration,
xfce-desktop-service-configuration,
mate-desktop-service-configuration,
enlightenment-desktop-service-configuration): Fix missing colon.
(pam-krb5-configuration): Fix missing period.
(gnu services vpn): Fix spelling issue.
(libvirt-configuration-log-outputs): Fix missing period.
(Guix on a VM#qemu options): Fix missing preposition and double the.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 37 +++++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index fcee57d9cd..297eff2405 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -6069,7 +6069,7 @@ are run after installation using the R function
 @end defvr
 
 @defvr {Scheme Variable} rakudo-build-system
-This variable is exported by @code{(guix build-system rakudo)} It
+This variable is exported by @code{(guix build-system rakudo)}.  It
 implements the build procedure used by @uref{https://rakudo.org/,
 Rakudo} for @uref{https://perl6.org/, Perl6} packages. It installs the
 package to @code{/gnu/store/@dots{}/NAME-VERSION/share/perl6} and
@@ -11758,8 +11758,8 @@ interpreted as backspace when the user types their login name.
 
 @item @code{kill-characters} (default: @code{#f})
 This option accepts a string that should be interpreted to mean "ignore
-all previous characters" (also called a "kill" character) when the types
-their login name.
+all previous characters" (also called a "kill" character) when the user
+types their login name.
 
 @item @code{chdir} (default: @code{#f})
 This option accepts, as a string, a directory path that will be changed
@@ -12024,7 +12024,7 @@ A directory path where the @command{guix-daemon} will perform builds.
 @deffn {Scheme Procedure} udev-service [#:udev @var{eudev} #:rules @code{'()}]
 Run @var{udev}, which populates the @file{/dev} directory dynamically.
 udev rules can be provided as a list of files through the @var{rules}
-variable.  The procedures @var{udev-rule} and @var{file->udev-rule} from
+variable.  The procedures @code{udev-rule} and @code{file->udev-rule} from
 @code{(gnu services base)} simplify the creation of such rule files.
 @end deffn
 
@@ -12806,7 +12806,7 @@ A list of local IP addresses or hostnames the ntpd daemon should listen on.
 A list of local IP address the ntpd daemon should use for outgoing queries.
 @item @code{sensor} (default: @code{'()})
 Specify a list of timedelta sensor devices ntpd should use.  @code{ntpd}
-will listen to each sensor that acutally exists and ignore non-existant ones.
+will listen to each sensor that actually exists and ignore non-existent ones.
 See @uref{https://man.openbsd.org/ntpd.conf, upstream documentation} for more
 information.
 @item @code{server} (default: @var{%ntp-servers})
@@ -12997,7 +12997,8 @@ so anyone (or just yourself) can download existing files or upload new
 files.
 
 @deffn {Scheme Variable} rsync-service-type
-This is the type for the @uref{https://rsync.samba.org, rsync} rsync daemon,
+This is the service type for the @uref{https://rsync.samba.org, rsync} daemon,
+The value for this service type is a
 @command{rsync-configuration} record as in this example:
 
 @example
@@ -13696,7 +13697,7 @@ default is @code{-nolisten tcp}.
 @deffn {Scheme Procedure} set-xorg-configuration @var{config} @
   [@var{login-manager-service-type}]
 Tell the log-in manager (of type @var{login-manager-service-type}) to use
-@var{config}, an <xorg-configuration> record.
+@var{config}, an @code{<xorg-configuration>} record.
 
 Since the Xorg configuration is embedded in the log-in manager's
 configuration---e.g., @code{gdm-configuration}---this procedure provides a
@@ -13832,7 +13833,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{"0640"}.
 
 @deftypevr {@code{files-configuration} parameter} log-location error-log
 Defines the error log filename.  Specifying a blank filename disables
-access log generation.  The value @code{stderr} causes log entries to be
+error log generation.  The value @code{stderr} causes log entries to be
 sent to the standard error file when the scheduler is running in the
 foreground, or to the system log daemon when run in the background.  The
 value @code{syslog} causes log entries to be sent to the system log
@@ -13897,7 +13898,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{"0644"}.
 
 @deftypevr {@code{files-configuration} parameter} log-location page-log
 Defines the page log filename.  Specifying a blank filename disables
-access log generation.  The value @code{stderr} causes log entries to be
+page log generation.  The value @code{stderr} causes log entries to be
 sent to the standard error file when the scheduler is running in the
 foreground, or to the system log daemon when run in the background.  The
 value @code{syslog} causes log entries to be sent to the system log
@@ -14643,7 +14644,7 @@ polkit with the actions from @code{gnome-settings-daemon}.
 Configuration record for the GNOME desktop environment.
 
 @table @asis
-@item @code{gnome} (default @code{gnome})
+@item @code{gnome} (default: @code{gnome})
 The GNOME package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -14653,7 +14654,7 @@ This is the type of a service to run the @uref{Xfce, https://xfce.org/}
 desktop environment.  Its value is an @code{xfce-desktop-configuration} object
 (see below.)
 
-This service that adds the @code{xfce} package to the system profile, and
+This service adds the @code{xfce} package to the system profile, and
 extends polkit with the ability for @code{thunar} to manipulate the file
 system as root from within a user session, after the user has authenticated
 with the administrator's password.
@@ -14663,7 +14664,7 @@ with the administrator's password.
 Configuration record for the Xfce desktop environment.
 
 @table @asis
-@item @code{xfce} (default @code{xfce})
+@item @code{xfce} (default: @code{xfce})
 The Xfce package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -14682,7 +14683,7 @@ profile, and extends polkit with the actions from
 Configuration record for the MATE desktop environment.
 
 @table @asis
-@item @code{mate} (default @code{mate})
+@item @code{mate} (default: @code{mate})
 The MATE package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -14694,7 +14695,7 @@ profile, and extends dbus with actions from @code{efl}.
 
 @deftp {Data Type} enlightenment-desktop-service-configuration
 @table @asis
-@item @code{enlightenment} (default @code{enlightenment})
+@item @code{enlightenment} (default: @code{enlightenment})
 The enlightenment package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -18034,7 +18035,7 @@ A service type for the Kerberos 5 PAM module.
 @end defvr
 
 @deftp {Data Type} pam-krb5-configuration
-Data type representing the configuration of the Kerberos 5 PAM module
+Data type representing the configuration of the Kerberos 5 PAM module.
 This type has the following parameters:
 @table @asis
 @item @code{pam-krb5} (default: @code{pam-krb5})
@@ -20120,7 +20121,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{()}.
 
 The @code{(gnu services vpn)} module provides services related to
 @dfn{virtual private networks} (VPNs).  It provides a @emph{client} service for
-your machine to connect to a VPN, and a @emph{servire} service for your machine
+your machine to connect to a VPN, and a @emph{server} service for your machine
 to host a VPN.  Both services use @uref{https://openvpn.net/, OpenVPN}.
 
 @deffn {Scheme Procedure} openvpn-client-service @
@@ -21717,7 +21718,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{"3:remote 4:event"}.
 @deftypevr {@code{libvirt-configuration} parameter} string log-outputs
 Logging outputs.
 
-An output is one of the places to save logging information The format
+An output is one of the places to save logging information.  The format
 for an output can be:
 
 @table @code
@@ -24716,7 +24717,7 @@ better performance than if it were emulating a complete disk drive.  See the
 QEMU and KVM documentation for more info.
 
 @item -drive if=none,file=/tmp/qemu-image,id=myhd
-Use our QCOW image, the @file{/tmp/qemu-image} file, as the backing store the
+Use our QCOW image, the @file{/tmp/qemu-image} file, as the backing store for
 the ``myhd'' drive.
 @end table
 
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* [bug#35436] [PATCH 3/3] doc: Fix typo (after sqash)
  2019-04-29 22:57 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 2/2] doc: Minor fixes to the manual Miguel
@ 2019-04-29 23:08   ` Miguel
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 11+ messages in thread
From: Miguel @ 2019-04-29 23:08 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: 35436

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El Tue, 30 Apr 2019 00:57:38 +0200
Miguel <rosen644835@gmail.com> escribió:
> Hi,
> 
> I've squashed the patches for the manual into a single one. It would
> have been great having them for the release, but we are almost there
> and they are all editorial/typographic issues and probably can wait
> for the next release cycle.
> 
> Best regards,
> Miguel
> 

And here comes another one, sorry.

Best regards,
Miguel
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doc: Fix typo.

* doc/guix.texi (VM): Missing dot after URL---long line.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 2 +-
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From 1348ef6f90950376e5bae83f6f21d86309192942 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 30 Apr 2019 01:04:07 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix typo.

* doc/guix.texi (VM): Missing dot after URL---long line.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index 297eff2405..98e84923fe 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -24650,7 +24650,7 @@ example graph.
 @cindex virtual machine
 To run Guix in a virtual machine (VM), one can use the pre-built Guix VM image
 distributed at
-@indicateurl{@value{BASE-URL}/guix-system-vm-image-@value{VERSION}.@var{system}.xz}
+@indicateurl{@value{BASE-URL}/guix-system-vm-image-@value{VERSION}.@var{system}.xz}.
 This image is a compressed image in QCOW format.  You will first need to
 decompress with @command{xz -d}, and then you can pass it to an emulator such
 as QEMU (see below for details).
-- 
2.21.0


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* bug#35436: Typos
  2019-04-26 11:20 [bug#35436] Typos Miguel
                   ` (7 preceding siblings ...)
  2019-04-29 22:57 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 2/2] doc: Minor fixes to the manual Miguel
@ 2019-05-05 15:26 ` Danny Milosavljevic
  8 siblings, 0 replies; 11+ messages in thread
From: Danny Milosavljevic @ 2019-05-05 15:26 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Miguel; +Cc: 35436-done

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Pushed these doc fixes to guix master, thanks!

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