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From: Miguel <rosen644835@gmail.com>
To: 35436@debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: [bug#35436] [PATCH 2/2] doc: Fix typos.
Date: Fri, 26 Apr 2019 13:22:33 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20190426132233.1e77ca22@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20190426132019.7ce4f149@gmail.com>

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doc: Fix typos.

* doc/guix.texi (rakudo-build-system, libvirt-configuration,
pam-krb5): Missing period between sentences.
(gnu services vpn): Fix server spelling.
(agetty-configuration): Missing subject in the sentence.
(udev-service): Fix markup for Scheme procedures.
({gnome,xfce,mate}-desktop-service): Missing colon after default.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

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From 3bf4ba8a86fdfdc2244f92ad0899a9d7fe3fa52d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Miguel=20=C3=81ngel=20Arruga=20Vivas?=
 <rosen644835@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 24 Apr 2019 16:37:21 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] doc: Fix typos.

* doc/guix.texi (rakudo-build-system, libvirt-configuration,
pam-krb5): Missing period between sentences.
(gnu services vpn): Fix server spelling.
(agetty-configuration): Missing subject in the sentence.
(udev-service): Fix markup for Scheme procedures.
({gnome,xfce,mate}-desktop-service): Missing colon after default.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index 879cb562e9..46f23b9b15 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -6042,7 +6042,7 @@ are run after installation using the R function
 @end defvr
 
 @defvr {Scheme Variable} rakudo-build-system
-This variable is exported by @code{(guix build-system rakudo)} It
+This variable is exported by @code{(guix build-system rakudo)}.  It
 implements the build procedure used by @uref{https://rakudo.org/,
 Rakudo} for @uref{https://perl6.org/, Perl6} packages. It installs the
 package to @code{/gnu/store/@dots{}/NAME-VERSION/share/perl6} and
@@ -11726,8 +11726,8 @@ interpreted as backspace when the user types their login name.
 
 @item @code{kill-characters} (default: @code{#f})
 This option accepts a string that should be interpreted to mean "ignore
-all previous characters" (also called a "kill" character) when the types
-their login name.
+all previous characters" (also called a "kill" character) when the user
+types their login name.
 
 @item @code{chdir} (default: @code{#f})
 This option accepts, as a string, a directory path that will be changed
@@ -11992,7 +11992,7 @@ A directory path where the @command{guix-daemon} will perform builds.
 @deffn {Scheme Procedure} udev-service [#:udev @var{eudev} #:rules @code{'()}]
 Run @var{udev}, which populates the @file{/dev} directory dynamically.
 udev rules can be provided as a list of files through the @var{rules}
-variable.  The procedures @var{udev-rule} and @var{file->udev-rule} from
+variable.  The procedures @code{udev-rule} and @code{file->udev-rule} from
 @code{(gnu services base)} simplify the creation of such rule files.
 @end deffn
 
@@ -14611,7 +14611,7 @@ polkit with the actions from @code{gnome-settings-daemon}.
 Configuration record for the GNOME desktop environment.
 
 @table @asis
-@item @code{gnome} (default @code{gnome})
+@item @code{gnome} (default: @code{gnome})
 The GNOME package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -14631,7 +14631,7 @@ with the administrator's password.
 Configuration record for the Xfce desktop environment.
 
 @table @asis
-@item @code{xfce} (default @code{xfce})
+@item @code{xfce} (default: @code{xfce})
 The Xfce package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -14650,7 +14650,7 @@ profile, and extends polkit with the actions from
 Configuration record for the MATE desktop environment.
 
 @table @asis
-@item @code{mate} (default @code{mate})
+@item @code{mate} (default: @code{mate})
 The MATE package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -14662,7 +14662,7 @@ profile, and extends dbus with actions from @code{efl}.
 
 @deftp {Data Type} enlightenment-desktop-service-configuration
 @table @asis
-@item @code{enlightenment} (default @code{enlightenment})
+@item @code{enlightenment} (default: @code{enlightenment})
 The enlightenment package to use.
 @end table
 @end deftp
@@ -18002,7 +18002,7 @@ A service type for the Kerberos 5 PAM module.
 @end defvr
 
 @deftp {Data Type} pam-krb5-configuration
-Data type representing the configuration of the Kerberos 5 PAM module
+Data type representing the configuration of the Kerberos 5 PAM module.
 This type has the following parameters:
 @table @asis
 @item @code{pam-krb5} (default: @code{pam-krb5})
@@ -20016,7 +20016,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{()}.
 
 The @code{(gnu services vpn)} module provides services related to
 @dfn{virtual private networks} (VPNs).  It provides a @emph{client} service for
-your machine to connect to a VPN, and a @emph{servire} service for your machine
+your machine to connect to a VPN, and a @emph{server} service for your machine
 to host a VPN.  Both services use @uref{https://openvpn.net/, OpenVPN}.
 
 @deffn {Scheme Procedure} openvpn-client-service @
@@ -21613,7 +21613,7 @@ Defaults to @samp{"3:remote 4:event"}.
 @deftypevr {@code{libvirt-configuration} parameter} string log-outputs
 Logging outputs.
 
-An output is one of the places to save logging information The format
+An output is one of the places to save logging information.  The format
 for an output can be:
 
 @table @code
-- 
2.21.0


  parent reply	other threads:[~2019-04-26 11:23 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 11+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2019-04-26 11:20 [bug#35436] Typos Miguel
2019-04-26 11:22 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 1/2] installer: Fix typo Miguel
2019-04-26 11:22 ` Miguel [this message]
2019-04-26 21:09 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 3/3] doc: " Miguel
2019-04-26 21:48 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 4/4] " Miguel
2019-04-27  9:27 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 5/5] doc: Fix typos Miguel
2019-04-27 19:36 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 6/7] doc: Fix typo Miguel
2019-04-27 19:36 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 7/7] " Miguel
2019-04-29 22:57 ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 2/2] doc: Minor fixes to the manual Miguel
2019-04-29 23:08   ` [bug#35436] [PATCH 3/3] doc: Fix typo (after sqash) Miguel
2019-05-05 15:26 ` bug#35436: Typos Danny Milosavljevic

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