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From: Kyle Meyer <kyle@kyleam.com>
To: Eric Wong <e@yhbt.net>
Cc: meta@public-inbox.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/2] README: expand on the GUI non-requirement
Date: Wed, 01 Apr 2020 21:33:09 +0000	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <87r1x67uy2.fsf@kyleam.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20200401203443.GA25378@dcvr>

Eric Wong <e@yhbt.net> writes:

> Thanks and good point about the run-on sentence.
>
> "as" could work, I think, the sentence may just be too long.
> Perhaps just a separate sentence:
>
> 	"communication.  Users ..."
>
> Thoughts?

A separate sentence reads well to me.  Thanks.

  reply	other threads:[~2020-04-01 21:33 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 9+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2020-04-01  6:04 [PATCH 0/2] doc: pre-release doc updates Eric Wong
2020-04-01  6:04 ` [PATCH 1/2] README: expand on the GUI non-requirement Eric Wong
2020-04-01 15:30   ` Kyle Meyer
2020-04-01 20:34     ` Eric Wong
2020-04-01 21:33       ` Kyle Meyer [this message]
2020-04-01 23:40         ` Eric Wong
2020-04-02  0:26           ` Kyle Meyer
2020-04-02  5:54             ` [PATCH] README: add a missing "be" Eric Wong
2020-04-01  6:04 ` [PATCH 2/2] doc: update notes and HACKING ahead of 1.4 release Eric Wong

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