From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.4.2 (2018-09-13) on dcvr.yhbt.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-ASN: AS11403 173.228.157.0/24 X-Spam-Status: No, score=-3.9 required=3.0 tests=AWL,BAYES_00,DKIM_SIGNED, DKIM_VALID,DKIM_VALID_AU,DKIM_VALID_EF,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW,SPF_HELO_NONE, SPF_PASS shortcircuit=no autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no version=3.4.2 Received: from pb-smtp21.pobox.com (pb-smtp21.pobox.com [173.228.157.53]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by dcvr.yhbt.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 312461F487 for ; Wed, 1 Apr 2020 21:33:15 +0000 (UTC) Received: from pb-smtp21.pobox.com (unknown [127.0.0.1]) by pb-smtp21.pobox.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6D01BC16E6; Wed, 1 Apr 2020 17:33:14 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from kyle@kyleam.com) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed; d=pobox.com; h=from:to:cc :subject:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:mime-version :content-type; s=sasl; bh=UF+tu9qY2219Ew8ARMOPrCCR+wU=; b=DD9EUo Xy+iRNvN4b2C7veZ+2RN7pL89QEK6tikcyw4v3bE82Dkp3rkRxumXqDQRy6UBEy/ qmTAvQ/jDLgWjsnfD/Bi7F/Z00H6MruxyZ8SfstG6ukn5UygOcULNZfRFRRBeBA3 31bwpOyo26F3KPnH/qz3yoz40V85khTpswNc4= Received: from pb-smtp21.sea.icgroup.com (unknown [127.0.0.1]) by pb-smtp21.pobox.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 65856C16E5; Wed, 1 Apr 2020 17:33:14 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from kyle@kyleam.com) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed; d=kyleam.com; h=from:to:cc:subject:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:mime-version:content-type; s=mesmtp; bh=fCHLtQXP00i3ERPA4adD9TXp9ZGt3qG7yBLU4oAmlpQ=; b=ccx37LByD9+D4xMVKPSGStaBcwxJsx9PHBChcldxMV2L7cMsOPTIVo7TIw9kT/mG01nD2NagDV6wRz5DagpacH6/VLFFitkWhEalI1kpiR4TevXJkNIEUgMnac6MqVHwIOoWUP7pXVnVpo8qjx1ywYxqI30P2l/IeNdUiTZhHkw= Received: from localhost (unknown [45.33.91.115]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by pb-smtp21.pobox.com (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id CCEE3C16E2; Wed, 1 Apr 2020 17:33:11 -0400 (EDT) (envelope-from kyle@kyleam.com) From: Kyle Meyer To: Eric Wong Cc: meta@public-inbox.org Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/2] README: expand on the GUI non-requirement In-Reply-To: <20200401203443.GA25378@dcvr> References: <20200401060441.1750-2-e@yhbt.net> <87lfnf8br0.fsf@kyleam.com> <20200401203443.GA25378@dcvr> Date: Wed, 01 Apr 2020 21:33:09 +0000 Message-ID: <87r1x67uy2.fsf@kyleam.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain X-Pobox-Relay-ID: 63388B2C-7460-11EA-9451-8D86F504CC47-24757444!pb-smtp21.pobox.com List-Id: Eric Wong writes: > Thanks and good point about the run-on sentence. > > "as" could work, I think, the sentence may just be too long. > Perhaps just a separate sentence: > > "communication. Users ..." > > Thoughts? A separate sentence reads well to me. Thanks.