From: Canan Talayhan <canan.t.talayhan@gmail.com>
To: Maxime Devos <maximedevos@telenet.be>
Cc: guix-devel@gnu.org
Subject: Re: [Outreachy] - Guix Data Service - Set a more informative page title
Date: Tue, 13 Apr 2021 18:56:00 +0300 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <CAAosC5+ZPwVZyHXAA3Lj7Sqc94SivNWfSk+uAj9Xy3qtqmU6rg@mail.gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <eaae79f17e2137b731271d223e3376cfa0bd4c81.camel@telenet.be>
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Hi Maxime,
Is this ‘introductory task’ publicly available? If so, could you post a
> link?
I'm not up-to-date with Outreachy.
>
It's not available under the Official Outreachy page if you're not logged
in.
> Typographical nitpick: I would use a proper dash here (the figure dash ‒
> or the —
> em dash, I always forgot which is correct), instead of the hyphen-minus -.
> (Resource: <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dash#Figure_dash>).
>
It's a good catch : ) done.
You could bring the 'if' inside:
> `((title ,(if title
> (string-append title " ‒ Guix Data Service")
> "Guix Data Service")))
>
>
> and a simplification is possible, as adding a title is unconditional:
> (head
> (title ,(if title (string-append ...) ...))
> ...)
>
After sending the patch I've turned the patch like below.
(title ,(if title
`,(string-append title " - Guix Data Service")
'("Guix Data Service")))
Nitpick: I would put a space before "Jobs"? Also, what's the point of
> defining this variable, if it is constant?
>
We're generating titles using the available h1 value to prevent duplication.
Adding space between the id and job could be more readable, I agree. It's
done.
Thanks for the improvements,
Canan Talayhan
MSc. in Computer Engineering
Guix IRC: canant
On Tue, Apr 13, 2021 at 2:58 PM Maxime Devos <maximedevos@telenet.be> wrote:
> On Tue, 2021-04-13 at 12:01 +0300, Canan Talayhan wrote:
> > Hi everyone,
> Welcome!
>
> > My name is Canan. I'm an Outreachy applicant. I'm working on the
> introductory task for
> > Guix Data Service.
>
> Is this ‘introductory task’ publicly available? If so, could you post a
> link?
> I'm not up-to-date with Outreachy.
>
> > Introductory task:
> > Set a more informative page title for any page where the title is "Guix
> Data Service"
> >
> > I've created a patch for the "Jobs" page. If it looks good for everyone
> then I can proceed with
> > other applicable pages.
> >
> > Now, I'm working on the title part of the code snippet below to make it
> more elegant.
> >
> > ```scm
> > (define* (layout #:key
> > (head '())
> > (body '())
> > title
> > description)
> > `((doctype "html")
> > (html
> > (@ (lang "en"))
> > (head
> > ,@(if title
> > `((title ,(string-append title " - Guix Data Service")))
>
> Typographical nitpick: I would use a proper dash here (the figure dash ‒
> or the —
> em dash, I always forgot which is correct), instead of the hyphen-minus -.
> (Resource: <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dash#Figure_dash>).
>
> > `((title "Guix Data Service")))
> > ```
>
> You could bring the 'if' inside:
> `((title ,(if title
> (string-append title " ‒ Guix Data Service")
> "Guix Data Service")))
>
>
> and a simplification is possible, as adding a title is unconditional:
> (head
> (title ,(if title (string-append ...) ...))
> ...)
>
> > Could you please review and share your comments? I'll be appreciated.
> >
> > Attached file: jobs-title-and-view.diff
>
> + (define page-header"Jobs")
>
> Nitpick: I would put a space before "Jobs"? Also, what's the point of
> defining this variable, if it is constant?
>
> + (define page-header "Job")
> +
> (layout
> + #:title
> + (string-append page-header job-id)
>
> IIRC, job ids are integers, so this would result in titles
> like "Job1234"? Titles like "Job 1234" would be better.
>
> I haven't tested the patch, but better page titles are good, thanks!
>
> Maxime.
> Sometimes reviewing patches, but without actually testing them.
> Guix IRC: mdevos
>
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next prev parent reply other threads:[~2021-04-13 16:11 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 19+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2021-04-13 9:01 [Outreachy] - Guix Data Service - Set a more informative page title Canan Talayhan
2021-04-13 11:57 ` Maxime Devos
2021-04-13 15:56 ` Canan Talayhan [this message]
2021-04-13 17:51 ` Maxime Devos
2021-04-15 12:08 ` Canan Talayhan
2021-04-15 21:52 ` Christopher Baines
2021-04-16 9:58 ` Canan Talayhan
2021-04-16 11:11 ` Christopher Baines
2021-04-18 13:42 ` Canan Talayhan
2021-04-18 17:53 ` Christopher Baines
2021-04-18 20:37 ` Canan Talayhan
2021-04-19 19:16 ` Christopher Baines
2021-04-21 15:43 ` Canan Talayhan
2021-04-22 19:46 ` Christopher Baines
2021-04-23 8:34 ` Canan Talayhan
2021-04-23 12:10 ` Christopher Baines
2021-04-24 11:39 ` Christopher Baines
2021-04-24 15:30 ` Canan Talayhan
2021-04-24 20:21 ` Christopher Baines
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