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From: zimoun <zimon.toutoune@gmail.com>
To: "Ludovic Courtès" <ludo@gnu.org>
Cc: 43482@debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: [bug#43482] [PATCH 3/3] doc: Reorder the "Channels" section.
Date: Thu, 24 Sep 2020 17:13:02 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <CAJ3okZ0wC9S0-rgKuvuCgqSwshHs0XM7nHkTcrf8OiHbwU1ocw@mail.gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <874knn8bl0.fsf@gnu.org>

Hi,

Thank you for the review.

On Thu, 24 Sep 2020 at 16:59, Ludovic Courtès <ludo@gnu.org> wrote:

> > * doc/guix.texi (Channels): Reorder the section.
> > Minor tweaks to keep uniformity.
> > Update the master menu.
>
> It would be nice if you could better describe what’s moved where since
> looking at the diff doesn’t help understand it.

I will try to do my best. :-)


> > +@node Writing custom channels
> > +@subsection Writing custom channels
>
> Should be “Writing Custom Channels”.
>
> Maybe “Creating a Channel” is more to the point actually?

Ok.


> > +Last, as a channel author, you may want to run an authenticated channel
> > +(@pxref{Channel Authentication}), then @pxref{Specifying Channel
> > +Authorizations} for details.
>
> Maybe something like:
>
>   As a channel author, consider bundling authentication material with
>   your channel so that users can authenticate it.  @xref{Channel
>   Authentication}, and @ref{Specifying Channel Authorizations}, for
>   info on how to do it.

Ok.

> (Note: @pxref cannot be used in the middle of a sentence like you did
> above.  I always end up re-reading the Texinfo manual to find which
> cross-reference command to use in which context…)

Thanks for the explanations.


> Could you send updated patches?

Ok.


Cheers,
simon




  reply	other threads:[~2020-09-24 15:14 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 14+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2020-09-18  1:37 [bug#43482] [PATCH 0/3] doc: Reorder "Channels" section zimoun
2020-09-18  1:45 ` [bug#43482] [PATCH 1/3] doc: Update the master menu zimoun
2020-09-18  1:45   ` [bug#43482] [PATCH 2/3] doc: Add the "Channels" section menu zimoun
2020-09-24 14:52     ` Ludovic Courtès
2020-09-24 15:05       ` zimoun
2020-09-25  9:20         ` Ludovic Courtès
2020-09-18  1:45   ` [bug#43482] [PATCH 3/3] doc: Reorder the "Channels" section zimoun
2020-09-24 14:59     ` Ludovic Courtès
2020-09-24 15:13       ` zimoun [this message]
2020-09-24 14:51   ` [bug#43482] [PATCH 1/3] doc: Update the master menu Ludovic Courtès
2020-09-24 15:28     ` zimoun
2020-09-25 20:00 ` [bug#43482] [PATCH v2 1/2] " zimoun
2020-09-25 20:00   ` [bug#43482] [PATCH v2 2/2] doc: Promote "Channels" as chapter and reorder zimoun
2020-09-27 20:38   ` bug#43482: [PATCH v2 1/2] doc: Update the master menu Ludovic Courtès

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