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Resent-From: zimoun Original-Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-CC: guix-patches@gnu.org Resent-Date: Thu, 24 Sep 2020 15:14:02 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: followup 43482 X-GNU-PR-Package: guix-patches X-GNU-PR-Keywords: patch To: Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?= Cc: 43482@debbugs.gnu.org Received: via spool by 43482-submit@debbugs.gnu.org id=B43482.160096040320521 (code B ref 43482); Thu, 24 Sep 2020 15:14:02 +0000 Received: (at 43482) by debbugs.gnu.org; 24 Sep 2020 15:13:23 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:41266 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1kLSvy-0005Kv-RQ for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Thu, 24 Sep 2020 11:13:23 -0400 Received: from mail-qk1-f195.google.com ([209.85.222.195]:37818) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1kLSvv-0005Kh-Jf for 43482@debbugs.gnu.org; Thu, 24 Sep 2020 11:13:21 -0400 Received: by mail-qk1-f195.google.com with SMTP id 16so3581537qkf.4 for <43482@debbugs.gnu.org>; Thu, 24 Sep 2020 08:13:19 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date:message-id:subject:to :cc:content-transfer-encoding; bh=1IIr1FT71wg2RWDyEnp8O9zBr4ZdmvUj78aMamXyT90=; b=LnVmdkhzqIQn8qLDYRnO1DKmiMHEvDd4vpZQVpRjIr3LEbY6X67pmqwlPMUwjvPgN9 PDmK7XioyZ035lxlhEwH/iffEFziovFwFore+6q2cEU2TtVyWy2PWEgoXF2k3taWFBk2 aH3f7Kc9tbNC/cWqesOq05GmV3cth96h7JsUPIRE/r7Ys7l7mq6jP9zY/cnq6D7gPbcl KjMrBn8HKH+E8UAdZCZtg61XaMNmnq2wmt1KGO2iBBKb6X3cgO9v7RNPBv7gQ7RX28wL 9ld/y0a5I5/HIuFPjlKvQNQl5lOHYwtghUW8w8zzRZcm4Ku1ueS8wElbJE6/poymBznL DJag== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:references:in-reply-to:from:date :message-id:subject:to:cc:content-transfer-encoding; bh=1IIr1FT71wg2RWDyEnp8O9zBr4ZdmvUj78aMamXyT90=; b=h3CXM7S8+/3Rv4o6mxpOGu0EA40GEswHXchd+YzJZmaZqAXaip4RSd/dKuzTOaTci1 2Thc0d/mC8FNh6B1zE72qWKxGNDNhpveOG88E+QGscvD1wiAxjGFFMmotWSXWhRcdrKQ LNAXIcMnqUM9IFtyz9vjn5mR4H3ZErEja6TgIpqCELEyXmDarjUhhfpA2JGy1aFfXboS RpgULRStAUg6XIRM+12ehhlQah/U/fRVmrErUig+7jV2wcqzC5weuh9f1rh0FUO6VMeW 73of9sYEFE2ZRtIXT4ZVWfVYoCPooC+nj0ElwX4/tRcrOsvz2PiASrtnHKut9d+u6T8t 6KAQ== X-Gm-Message-State: AOAM532vaSokkLB+zxkkdIGGbBSSZVIb2zz19gDOja8q2MAySFTxq1j4 4OMRfSo5dyN4hbRP1QZSfZVY+NTReRTbVgoDmbo= X-Google-Smtp-Source: ABdhPJwBpTPdq2PzeeaPA3VQhbJTm8cshBNAaNc7MU94BloMuhTI29U9FYtN2PMHq3FU+k2OlH/nl1n/7LWipOqi1Hk= X-Received: by 2002:a05:620a:a09:: with SMTP id i9mr89557qka.201.1600960393852; Thu, 24 Sep 2020 08:13:13 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 References: <20200918014502.6081-1-zimon.toutoune@gmail.com> <20200918014502.6081-3-zimon.toutoune@gmail.com> <874knn8bl0.fsf@gnu.org> In-Reply-To: <874knn8bl0.fsf@gnu.org> From: zimoun Date: Thu, 24 Sep 2020 17:13:02 +0200 Message-ID: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Spam-Score: 0.0 (/) X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-Spam-Score: -1.0 (-) X-BeenThere: guix-patches@gnu.org List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: "Guix-patches" X-Scanner: scn0 Authentication-Results: aspmx1.migadu.com; dkim=fail (rsa verify failed) header.d=gmail.com header.s=20161025 header.b=LnVmdkhz; dmarc=fail reason="SPF not aligned (relaxed)" header.from=gmail.com (policy=none); spf=pass (aspmx1.migadu.com: domain of guix-patches-bounces@gnu.org designates 209.51.188.17 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=guix-patches-bounces@gnu.org X-Spam-Score: 0.09 X-TUID: 7r35HAeuQM/z Hi, Thank you for the review. On Thu, 24 Sep 2020 at 16:59, Ludovic Court=C3=A8s wrote: > > * doc/guix.texi (Channels): Reorder the section. > > Minor tweaks to keep uniformity. > > Update the master menu. > > It would be nice if you could better describe what=E2=80=99s moved where = since > looking at the diff doesn=E2=80=99t help understand it. I will try to do my best. :-) > > +@node Writing custom channels > > +@subsection Writing custom channels > > Should be =E2=80=9CWriting Custom Channels=E2=80=9D. > > Maybe =E2=80=9CCreating a Channel=E2=80=9D is more to the point actually? Ok. > > +Last, as a channel author, you may want to run an authenticated channe= l > > +(@pxref{Channel Authentication}), then @pxref{Specifying Channel > > +Authorizations} for details. > > Maybe something like: > > As a channel author, consider bundling authentication material with > your channel so that users can authenticate it. @xref{Channel > Authentication}, and @ref{Specifying Channel Authorizations}, for > info on how to do it. Ok. > (Note: @pxref cannot be used in the middle of a sentence like you did > above. I always end up re-reading the Texinfo manual to find which > cross-reference command to use in which context=E2=80=A6) Thanks for the explanations. > Could you send updated patches? Ok. Cheers, simon