[bug#68092] [PATCH] doc: Fix typos and add readonly option to qemu invocation

[bug#68092] [PATCH] doc: Fix typos and add readonly option to qemu invocation

[Nikolaos Chatzikonstantinou]

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Hello list,

Some minor corrections in the info manual, see attached patch.

Regards,
Nikolaos Chatzikonstantinou

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From 5e9178a2e2b0e90b65dc990e23811c0b7e40b748 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nikolaos Chatzikonstantinou <nchatz314@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 28 Dec 2023 17:20:28 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix typos and add readonly option to qemu invocation

* doc/guix.texi: Fix typos and add readonly option to qemu invocation.
---
 doc/guix.texi | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index bc04bb8150..72638d1f11 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -2935,7 +2935,7 @@ Boot the USB installation image in an VM:
 qemu-system-x86_64 -m 1024 -smp 1 -enable-kvm \
   -nic user,model=virtio-net-pci -boot menu=on,order=d \
   -drive file=guix-system.img \
-  -drive media=cdrom,file=guix-system-install-@value{VERSION}.@var{system}.iso
+  -drive media=cdrom,readonly=on,file=guix-system-install-@value{VERSION}.@var{system}.iso
 @end example
 
 @code{-enable-kvm} is optional, but significantly improves performance,
@@ -17567,7 +17567,7 @@ mounted.}.
 
 @findex file-system-label
 File system labels are created using the @code{file-system-label}
-procedure, UUIDs are created using @code{uuid}, and @file{/dev} node are
+procedure, UUIDs are created using @code{uuid}, and @file{/dev} nodes are
 plain strings.  Here's an example of a file system referred to by its
 label, as shown by the @command{e2label} command:
 
@@ -43458,7 +43458,7 @@ utilizing the configuration mechanism described in the previous chapter
 (@pxref{Defining Services}), but for user's dotfiles and packages.  It
 works both on Guix System and foreign distros and allows users to
 declare all the packages and services that should be installed and
-configured for the user.  Once a user has written a file containing
+configured for the user.  Once a user has written a file containing a
 @code{home-environment} record, such a configuration can be
 @dfn{instantiated} by an unprivileged user with the @command{guix home}
 command (@pxref{Invoking guix home}).
@@ -43781,8 +43781,8 @@ be used here, too.  Make sure that modules containing the specified
 packages are imported with @code{use-modules}.  To find a package or
 information about its module use @command{guix search} (@pxref{Invoking
 guix package}).  Alternatively, @code{specification->package} can be
-used to get the package record from string without importing related
-module.
+used to get the package record from a string without importing its
+related module.
 @end defvar
 
 There are few more essential services, but users are not expected to
-- 
2.39.2

bug#68092: [PATCH] doc: Fix typos and add readonly option to qemu invocation

[Mathieu Othacehe]

> * doc/guix.texi: Fix typos and add readonly option to qemu invocation.

Applied, thanks,

Mathieu