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From: "Ludovic Courtès" <ludo@gnu.org>
To: Andy Tai <atai@atai.org>
Cc: 64261@debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: [bug#64261] [PATCH] gnu: Add xrdp
Date: Tue, 11 Jul 2023 16:12:00 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <87zg4235cf.fsf_-_@gnu.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <eb07db4c5ce6ee7d09cff956448209990ab1038d.1687850929.git.atai@atai.org> (Andy Tai's message of "Tue, 27 Jun 2023 00:29:39 -0700")

Hi Andy,

Andy Tai <atai@atai.org> skribis:

> * gnu/packages/rdesktop.scm (xrdp): New variabble
>   (xorgxrdp): New variable

Could you send a v2 with one patch per package, as is customary?

> +    (home-page "https://www.xrdp.org")
> +    (synopsis "Open source RDP server ")

Please remote the trailing slash as well as “open source”: everything is
free software in here, so no need to specify it! :-) However, please
spell out “Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP)”.

> +    (description
> +     "Xrdp provides a graphical login to remote machines using
> +Microsoft Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP).  Xrdp accepts connections from a
> +variety of RDP clients:
> +* FreeRDP
> +* rdesktop

Please use @itemize.

See
<https://guix.gnu.org/manual/devel/en/html_node/Synopses-and-Descriptions.html>.

> +(define-public xorgxrdp
> +  (package
> +    (name "xorgxrdp")
> +    (version "0.9.19")
> +    (source (origin
> +              (method url-fetch)
> +              (uri (string-append
> +                    "https://github.com/neutrinolabs/xorgxrdp/releases/download/v"
> +                    version "/xorgxrdp-" version ".tar.gz"))
> +              (sha256
> +               (base32
> +                "0m8lvdnhfvwwqrr56difgy3mblplp23x6iy12kl4r8i87ic4rky1"))))

Should it inherit from ‘xrdp’?  I fail to see what the difference is.

> +    (arguments
> +     (list #:configure-flags #~(list "--enable-strict-locations=yes"
> +                                     (string-append "XRDP_CFLAGS=-I"
> +                                                    (assoc-ref %build-inputs
> +                                                               "xrdp")
> +                                                    "/common"))))

Rather than (assoc-ref …), write #$(this-package-input "xrdp').

Also, xrdp should not have .h files under /common; it should be under
/include or /include/common or similar.  Could you check that?

> +    (home-page "https://github.com/neutrinolabs/xorgxrdp")
> +    (synopsis "Xorg drivers for xrdp")
> +    (description
> +     "xorgxrdp is a collection of modules to be used with a pre-existing X.Org
> +install to make the X server act like X11rdp")

Please add a period at the end of the sentence and expound a bit so one
can better understand what this is about.

Thanks in advance!

Ludo’.




  reply	other threads:[~2023-07-11 14:44 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 17+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2023-06-24  7:37 [bug#64261] [PATCH] gnu: Add xrdp Andy Tai
2023-06-24  9:21 ` [bug#64261] [PATCH v2] " Andy Tai
2023-06-27  7:29 ` [bug#64261] [PATCH v3] gnu: Add xrdp and xorgxrdp Andy Tai
2023-07-11 14:12   ` Ludovic Courtès [this message]
2023-07-11 14:13     ` [bug#64261] [PATCH] gnu: Add xrdp Andy Tai
2023-07-22 23:28 ` [bug#64261] [PATCH v4 0/2] Add xrdp and xorgxrdp Andy Tai
2023-07-22 23:28   ` [bug#64261] [PATCH v4 1/2] gnu: Add xrdp Andy Tai
2023-07-22 23:28   ` [bug#64261] [PATCH v4 2/2] gnu: Add xorgxrdp Andy Tai
2023-07-26  5:56 ` [bug#64261] Guix QA showing failure on invalid derivation Andy Tai
2023-07-26  9:53   ` Christopher Baines
2023-07-29  3:53 ` [bug#64261] [PATCH v5 1/2] gnu: Add xrdp Andy Tai
2023-07-29  3:53   ` [bug#64261] [PATCH v5 2/2] gnu: Add xorgxrdp Andy Tai
2023-08-07 13:27   ` [bug#64261] [PATCH] gnu: Add xrdp Ludovic Courtès
2023-08-07 13:29     ` Andy Tai
2023-08-10  5:31 ` [bug#64261] [PATCH v6 1/2] " Andy Tai
2023-08-10  5:31   ` [bug#64261] [PATCH v6 2/2] gnu: Add xorgxrdp Andy Tai
2023-08-12 20:42   ` bug#64261: [PATCH v6 1/2] gnu: Add xrdp Ludovic Courtès

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