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From: "Ludovic Courtès" <ludo@gnu.org>
To: Hartmut Goebel <h.goebel@crazy-compilers.com>
Cc: 56145@debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: [bug#56145] [PATCH 0/5] Add menus to Services sub-sections
Date: Sun, 03 Jul 2022 12:33:03 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <87bku61o68.fsf_-_@gnu.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <0dd93b0a014e8a3556e8aba5442d2d3b589ab525.1655908912.git.h.goebel@crazy-compilers.com> (Hartmut Goebel's message of "Wed, 22 Jun 2022 17:55:06 +0200")

Hi,

This looks like a welcome improvement!  Nitpick:

Hartmut Goebel <h.goebel@crazy-compilers.com> skribis:

> +* Tailon Service::                   A web application for viewing and searching log files.
> +* Darkstat Service::                 A packet sniffer.
> +* Prometheus Node Exporter Service:: A client/agent for the Prometheus monitoring system.
> +* Zabbix server::                    A high performance monitoring system.

I think you can remove the article “a”, it doesn’t bring much.

Thanks,
Ludo’.




  reply	other threads:[~2022-07-03 10:34 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 11+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2022-06-22 14:45 [bug#56145] [PATCH 0/5] Add menus to Services sub-sections Hartmut Goebel
2022-06-22 15:55 ` [bug#56145] [PATCH 1/5] doc: Add menus to Services sub-sections (part 1/2) Hartmut Goebel
2022-07-03 10:33   ` Ludovic Courtès [this message]
2022-06-22 15:55 ` [bug#56145] [PATCH 2/5] doc: Add menus to Services sub-sections (part 2/2) Hartmut Goebel
2022-07-03 10:38   ` [bug#56145] [PATCH 0/5] Add menus to Services sub-sections Ludovic Courtès
2022-07-04 14:30     ` Hartmut Goebel
2022-07-04 20:08       ` Ludovic Courtès
2022-06-22 15:55 ` [bug#56145] [PATCH 3/5] doc: Fix a URL Hartmut Goebel
2022-06-22 15:55 ` [bug#56145] [PATCH 4/5] doc: Small rewording Hartmut Goebel
2022-06-22 15:55 ` [bug#56145] [PATCH 5/5] doc: Add a URL link Hartmut Goebel
2022-06-22 18:59 ` [bug#56145] [PATCH 0/5] Add menus to Services sub-sections Maxime Devos

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