* [bug#64690] [PATCH] doc: Fix typos.
@ 2023-07-17 19:06 Florian Pelz
2023-07-17 20:07 ` Ludovic Courtès
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From: Florian Pelz @ 2023-07-17 19:06 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: 64690; +Cc: Florian Pelz
* doc/guix.texi (Creating a Channel): Fix typos.
---
Not confident about the commas, but still.
doc/guix.texi | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index 9af1b4417b..ee03de04dc 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -5776,7 +5776,7 @@ a package collection. This involves the following steps:
@enumerate
@item
-Channels live in a Git repository so the first step, when creating a
+A channel lives in a Git repository so the first step, when creating a
channel, is to create its repository:
@example
@@ -5790,7 +5790,7 @@ The next step is to create files containing package modules
(@pxref{Package Modules}), each of which will contain one or more
package definitions (@pxref{Defining Packages}). A channel can provide
things other than packages, such as build systems or services; we're
-using packages as most common use case.
+using packages as it's the most common use case.
For example, Alice might want to provide a module called @code{(alice
packages greetings)} that will provide her favorite ``hello world''
@@ -5815,7 +5815,7 @@ that.
@item
With this first module in place, the next step is to test the packages
it provides. This can be done with @command{guix build}, which needs to
-be fold to look for modules in the Git checkout. For example, assuming
+be told to look for modules in the Git checkout. For example, assuming
@code{(alice packages greetings)} provides a package called
@code{hi-from-alice}, Alice will run this command from the Git checkout:
@@ -5856,7 +5856,7 @@ example, @code{(alice packages greetings)} will automatically be found
by the @command{guix} command.
@end enumerate
-Voilà!
+Voilà!
@c What follows stems from discussions at
@c <https://debbugs.gnu.org/cgi/bugreport.cgi?bug=22629#134> as well as
base-commit: 3755941f038ec66fba568fa88d6b2d295e196723
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2.41.0
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* [bug#64690] [PATCH] doc: Fix typos.
2023-07-17 19:06 [bug#64690] [PATCH] doc: Fix typos Florian Pelz
@ 2023-07-17 20:07 ` Ludovic Courtès
2023-07-18 0:16 ` bug#64690: " pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)
0 siblings, 1 reply; 3+ messages in thread
From: Ludovic Courtès @ 2023-07-17 20:07 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Florian Pelz; +Cc: 64690
Hello!
Florian Pelz <pelzflorian@pelzflorian.de> skribis:
> * doc/guix.texi (Creating a Channel): Fix typos.
LGTM!
Ludo’.
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* bug#64690: [PATCH] doc: Fix typos.
2023-07-17 20:07 ` Ludovic Courtès
@ 2023-07-18 0:16 ` pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)
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From: pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) @ 2023-07-18 0:16 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: 64690-done; +Cc: Ludovic Courtès
Thanks! Pushed as 3a3752400d7a70a295a27b66f29457aeeaa2cf27.
Regards,
Florian
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