On 16.9.2013, at 19:50, David Rogers wrote: > Suvayu Ali writes: > >> Hello Gijs, >> >> On Mon, Sep 16, 2013 at 01:54:40PM +0200, Gijs Hillenius wrote: >>> I have a really wee suggestion for a change in the documentation that >>> comes with Org-mode version 7.9.3f and in Org 8.1 (on the web) >>> >>> In chapter 12.5 on Html export there is this section >>> >>> ,---- >>> | 12.5.9 CSS support >>> | >>> | You can also give style information for the exported file. >>> `---- >>> >>> To my non-English eyes the word "also" is ambigous. Earlier this month >>> it made me look all over that chapter for /other/ ways to give style >>> information. >>> >>> I think that "also" refers to "12.5.3 Quoting HTML tags" but I am not >>> sure. >>> >>> So, maybe the above quoted text for 12.5.9 could be improved by writing: >>> >>> Next to including simple HTML tags (see 12.5.3), style information can >>> be added to the exported file. >> >> I think also here suggests style information is optional; as in, you may >> or may not include it. >> >> Maybe others can chime in with their opinion? > > I think the "also" is not meant to be about "other ways to give style > information", but about "other things you could do that are not the same > as the immediately-preceding item". Yes, it was meant to mean something like this. In addition to all the other stuff mentioned before. I have changed it to You can modify the CSS style definitions for the exported file. Hope this is clearer. - Carsten > > Gijs - would it be clearer, in your opinion, to replace the word "also" > with "optionally"? > > -- > David R >