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From: Kyle Meyer <kyle@kyleam.com>
To: Eric Wong <e@yhbt.net>
Cc: meta@public-inbox.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/2] README: expand on the GUI non-requirement
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Eric Wong <e@yhbt.net> writes:

> diff --git a/README b/README
> index a3c1e61c..b90a5298 100644
> --- a/README
> +++ b/README
> @@ -14,7 +14,8 @@ public-inbox spawned around three main ideas:
>    use of non-Free services or software.
>  
>  * Graphical user interfaces should not be required for text-based
> -  communication.
> +  communication, users may have broken graphics drivers, limited
> +  eyesight, or unable to afford modern hardware.

This run-on sentence tripped me up.  For clarity, perhaps add "as" or
something similar before "users"?