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Date: Tue, 17 Oct 2023 07:54:28 +0000
From: Eric Wong <e@80x24.org>
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Subject: Re: [PATCH 4/3] install/README: improve wording
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Štěpán Němec <stepnem@smrk.net> wrote:
> On Tue, 17 Oct 2023 06:43:18 +0000
> Eric Wong wrote:
> 
> > -* users using from git or tarballs (and not the OS package manager)
> > +* users running our code from git or tarballs (and not the OS package manager)
> 
> LGTM, but I'd also wrap the line (the text file line length
> norm in the repo seems to lie between 60 and 70; this would
> be 78).

I think it's fine for a standalone lines such as list items to
be up to 80.  While paragraphs get harder to read with more
columns, standalone lines get distracting when wrapped (IMHO).