From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Ricardo Wurmus Subject: Re: [PATCH] doc: Small fixes for typos and missing words. Date: Wed, 30 Mar 2016 14:54:50 +0200 Message-ID: References: <87r3esrvk8.fsf@gnu.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:44832) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1alFeM-0001rw-TZ for guix-devel@gnu.org; Wed, 30 Mar 2016 08:55:12 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1alFeH-0001vq-S9 for guix-devel@gnu.org; Wed, 30 Mar 2016 08:55:06 -0400 In-Reply-To: <87r3esrvk8.fsf@gnu.org> List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: Roel Janssen Cc: guix-devel@gnu.org Roel Janssen writes: > Dear Guix, > > I noticed some typos and/or missing words when reading parts of the > manual. Instead of leaving it be, I attached a patch to fix them. > > I don't know how my commit message should look like in this case, so > please let me know when it is wrong. I think the first fix should be this: -computations (here computations include accesses to the store.) Values +computations (here computations include accesses to the store). Values rather than having a period both in and outside the parentheses. ~~ Ricardo