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dkim=fail ("headers rsa verify failed") header.d=riseup.net header.s=squak header.b=PE3AZRui; dmarc=fail reason="SPF not aligned (relaxed)" header.from=riseup.net (policy=none); spf=pass (aspmx1.migadu.com: domain of bug-guix-bounces@gnu.org designates 209.51.188.17 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=bug-guix-bounces@gnu.org X-Migadu-Queue-Id: A1EA0DB02 X-Spam-Score: -1.30 X-Migadu-Scanner: scn1.migadu.com X-TUID: oTMV1b41qPZD Fix the documentation as steps works for the end user as if he follow it 1 by 1 copy/paste (similar to nix docs as example), Otherwise current steps in the docs just junk to the end user. (you dont expect users to know and finish steps themselves) zimoun: > Hi, > > On Tue, 17 Aug 2021 at 23:28, zimoun wrote: >> On Thu, 15 Jul 2021 at 12:56, bo0od wrote: >>>> Could you propose a concrete wording solving >>>> the issues you see >>> >>> Not really because english is not my mother tongue so there going to be errors >>> in grammars, choosing of words..etc so better to be written by someone who has >>> better english than me. >>> >>> But for the commands to go on step by step i can give that with little text >>> and any webadmin can pick it up and arrange it accordingly. >>> >>> If guix documentation built on wikimedia it would be much easier because i can >>> register and upload my changes and can be reviewed and updated, But using >>> email for this is not the best way to achieve it but what to do.. >> >> Maybe you could provide what you find missing and where in the manual, >> with little text. It should be a good start for pointing what and how >> to improve. > > I plan to close this report if there is no concrete patch attached. > Because personally I do not see what could be done. > > All the best, > simon >