From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Laura Lazzati Subject: Re: We need your feedback of the documentation videos! Date: Tue, 13 Aug 2019 15:03:29 -0300 Message-ID: References: <87d0i9gfme.fsf@elephly.net> <87o90zwtdq.fsf@elephly.net> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="0000000000006e5dea059003773f" Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::10]:41059) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.86_2) (envelope-from ) id 1hxb9X-00028g-2H for guix-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 13 Aug 2019 14:04:12 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1hxb9V-0000pN-Jb for guix-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 13 Aug 2019 14:04:11 -0400 Received: from mail-wm1-x332.google.com ([2a00:1450:4864:20::332]:55952) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.0:RSA_AES_128_CBC_SHA1:16) (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1hxb9V-0000nW-9j for guix-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 13 Aug 2019 14:04:09 -0400 Received: by mail-wm1-x332.google.com with SMTP id f72so2330207wmf.5 for ; Tue, 13 Aug 2019 11:04:08 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: <87o90zwtdq.fsf@elephly.net> List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: "Guix-devel" To: Ricardo Wurmus Cc: Guix-devel --0000000000006e5dea059003773f Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="0000000000006e5de7059003773d" --0000000000006e5de7059003773d Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi! We now have https://guix.gnu.org/install.sh. You are free to use it. > Uhm I am getting a 404 for this link :/ > > Can you tell me how to reproduce this? Prehaps it=E2=80=99s a problem wi= th our > scripts? > I am attaching the cliSession file (cannot copy/paste it here, it gets broken). You have to generate the cli video, inside the root video directory, with ` ./create-cli-video.sh 01-installation-from-script en_US firstCli 1`. I get question mark symbols instead of the logo, that is why I changed it for *s. Don't pay attention to the mismatch between the audio and the video, it is something to solve later. > > It is confusing, because the user is not supposed to execute the =E2=80= =9Cyes=E2=80=9D > command but just to answer =E2=80=9Cyes=E2=80=9D to the question =E2=80= =94 on the same line. > OK, I removed the #, the 'yes' is still in a newline, is that too bad? > > I=E2=80=99d prefer either a simple ellipsis (=E2=80=9C=E2=80=A6=E2=80=9D)= or the actual console output. > OK, will change it for that :) As regards what Tobias said: "- 01:25 =E2=80=98The output tells us the signature is good.=E2=80=99 This made me chuckle: in typical GPG fashion, everything in its output implies the opposite unless you're already familiar with it. I realise it's far too late to touch the audio. Could we highlight =E2=80=98public key =E2=80=A6 imported=E2=80=99 after half a se= cond or so? I don't know if the scripts allow easy highlighting of output text like that." Yes, unluckily we should record again the audio to change that. There is still work to do regarding colouring the output. I don't know what the others would like to do (if publishing the videos with the output as it is, or waiting until improving that) Regards :) Laura --0000000000006e5de7059003773d Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Hi!

We now have https://guix.gnu.org/install.sh.=C2=A0 You are free t= o use it.
Uhm I am getting a 404 for this link :/
=

Can you tell me how to reproduce this?=C2=A0 Prehaps it=E2=80=99s a problem= with our
scripts?
I am attaching the cliSession file (cannot co= py/paste it here, it gets broken). You have to generate the cli video, insi= de the root video directory, with ` ./create-cli-video.sh 01-installation-f= rom-script en_US firstCli 1`. I get=C2=A0 question mark symbols instead of = the logo, that is why I changed it for *s. Don't pay attention to the m= ismatch between the audio and the video, it is something to solve later.

It is confusing, because the user is not supposed to execute the =E2=80=9Cy= es=E2=80=9D
command but just to answer =E2=80=9Cyes=E2=80=9D to the question =E2=80=94 = on the same line.
OK, I removed the #,=C2=A0 the '= yes' is still in a newline, is that too bad?=C2=A0

I=E2=80=99d prefer either a simple ellipsis (=E2=80=9C=E2=80=A6=E2=80=9D) o= r the actual console output.
OK, will change it for th= at :)

As regards what Tobias said:
"- 01:25 =E2=80=98The output tells us the s= ignature is good.=E2=80=99
=C2=A0 This made me chuckle: in typical GPG f= ashion, everything in its
=C2=A0 output implies the opposite unless you&= #39;re already familiar with
=C2=A0 it.=C2=A0 I realise it's far too= late to touch the audio.=C2=A0 Could we
=C2=A0 highlight =E2=80=98publi= c key =E2=80=A6 imported=E2=80=99 after half a second or so?
=C2=A0 I do= n't know if the scripts allow easy highlighting of output
=C2=A0text= like that."
Yes, unluckily we should record again the audio to c= hange that. There is still work to do regarding colouring the output. I don= 't know what the others would like to do (if publishing the videos with= the output as it is, or waiting until improving that)

Regards :)
Laura=
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