Le sam. 5 janv. 2019 17:59, Ricardo Wurmus <rekado@elephly.net> a écrit :

> Hey,
>
> I just installed Guix as a package manager on an aarch64 box.  The
> manual makes it a little difficult to perform all these steps, because
> the commands cannot be easily copied.  We do have the shell script, but
> the manual mentions it only in passing – as a user I skipped over the
> introduction and went straight to step 1, right past the script.
>
> What do you think about mentioning the script in the Installation
> section and only asking users to look in the subsections for details?
>
> Here’s a draft patch:
>
> --8<---------------cut here---------------start------------->8---
> diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
> index fcb5b8c08..f9afe2bc3 100644
> --- a/doc/guix.texi
> +++ b/doc/guix.texi
> @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Copyright @copyright{} 2015, 2016 Mathieu Lirzin@*
>  Copyright @copyright{} 2014 Pierre-Antoine Rault@*
>  Copyright @copyright{} 2015 Taylan Ulrich Bayırlı/Kammer@*
>  Copyright @copyright{} 2015, 2016, 2017 Leo Famulari@*
> -Copyright @copyright{} 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018 Ricardo Wurmus@*
> +Copyright @copyright{} 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019 Ricardo Wurmus@*
>  Copyright @copyright{} 2016 Ben Woodcroft@*
>  Copyright @copyright{} 2016, 2017, 2018 Chris Marusich@*
>  Copyright @copyright{} 2016, 2017, 2018 Efraim Flashner@*
> @@ -394,29 +394,32 @@ garbage collection of packages (@pxref{Features}).
>  @chapter Installation
>
>  @cindex installing Guix
> -@cindex official website
> -GNU Guix is available for download from its website at
> -@url{http://www.gnu.org/software/guix/}.  This section describes the
> -software requirements of Guix, as well as how to install it and get
> -ready to use it.
>
> -Note that this section is concerned with the installation of the package
> -manager, which can be done on top of a running GNU/Linux system.  If,
> -instead, you want to install the complete GNU operating system,
> -@pxref{System Installation}.
> +We recommend the use of this
> +@uref{
> https://git.savannah.gnu.org/cgit/guix.git/plain/etc/guix-install.sh,
> +shell installer script} to install Guix on top of a running GNU/Linux
> system,
> +thereafter called a @dfn{foreign distro}.@footnote{This section is
> concerned
> +with the installation of the package manager, which can be done on top of
> a
> +running GNU/Linux system.  If, instead, you want to install the complete
> GNU
> +operating system, @pxref{System Installation}.} The script automates the
> +download, installation, and initial configuration of Guix.  It should be
> run
> +as the root user.
>
>  @cindex foreign distro
>  @cindex directories related to foreign distro
> -
> -When installed on a running GNU/Linux system---thereafter called a
> -@dfn{foreign distro}---GNU@tie{}Guix complements the available tools
> -without interference.  Its data lives exclusively in two directories,
> -usually @file{/gnu/store} and @file{/var/guix}; other files on your
> -system, such as @file{/etc}, are left untouched.
> +When installed on a foreign distro, GNU@tie{}Guix complements the
> available
> +tools without interference.  Its data lives exclusively in two
> directories,
> +usually @file{/gnu/store} and @file{/var/guix}; other files on your
> system,
> +such as @file{/etc}, are left untouched.
>
>  Once installed, Guix can be updated by running @command{guix pull}
>  (@pxref{Invoking guix pull}).
>
> +If you prefer to perform the installation steps manually or want to tweak
> +them, you may find the following subsections useful.  They describe the
> +software requirements of Guix, as well as how to install it manually and
> get
> +ready to use it.
> +
>  @menu
>  * Binary Installation::         Getting Guix running in no time!
>  * Requirements::                Software needed to build and run Guix.
> @@ -437,11 +440,6 @@ dependencies.  This is often quicker than installing
> from source, which
>  is described in the next sections.  The only requirement is to have
>  GNU@tie{}tar and Xz.
>
> -We provide a
> -@uref{
> https://git.savannah.gnu.org/cgit/guix.git/plain/etc/guix-install.sh,
> -shell installer script}, which automates the download, installation, and
> -initial configuration of Guix.  It should be run as the root user.
> -
>  Installing goes along these lines:
>
>  @enumerate
> @@ -638,6 +636,10 @@ build procedure for Guix is the same as for other GNU
> software, and is
>  not covered here.  Please see the files @file{README} and @file{INSTALL}
>  in the Guix source tree for additional details.
>
> +@cindex official website
> +GNU Guix is available for download from its website at
> +@url{https://www.gnu.org/software/guix/}.
> +
>  GNU Guix depends on the following packages:
>
>  @itemize
> --8<---------------cut here---------------end--------------->8---
>

LGTM

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