David Hashe <david.hashe@dhashe.com> writes:

> * gnu/packages/gnome.scm (rhythmbox): New variable.

[...]

> +(define-public rhythmbox
> + (package
> +   (name "rhythmbox")
> +   (version "3.2.1")
> +   (source (origin
> +            (method url-fetch)
> +            (uri (string-append "mirror://gnome/sources/rhythmbox/3.2/"

Can you use (version-major+minor version) instead of “3.2” here?

> +                                "rhythmbox-" version ".tar.xz"))
> +            (sha256
> +             (base32
> +              "0f3radhlji7rxl760yl2vm49fvfslympxrpm8497acbmbd7wlhxz"))))
> +   (build-system glib-or-gtk-build-system)
> +  (native-inputs
> +    `(("intltool" ,intltool)
> +      ("glib" ,glib "bin")
> +      ("gobject-introspection" ,gobject-introspection)
> +      ("pkg-config" ,pkg-config)))

The indentation of (native-inputs ...) is wrong.
 

> +   (inputs
> +    `(("json-glib" ,json-glib)

[...]

> +      ("brasero" ,brasero)))

Is Brasero an optional input?  It’s a CD burning application, which
seems unrelated to a music player.  Will Totem work even if Brasero is
not available at build time?  Or does it integrate more deeply with
Brasero?

> +   (description "Rhythmbox is a music playing application for GNOME. It supports
> +playlists, song ratings, and any codecs installed through
> gstreamer.")

Please use two spaces at the end of a sentence.

~~ Ricardo