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From: Maxim Cournoyer <maxim.cournoyer@gmail.com>
To: guix-devel@gnu.org, Ricardo Wurmus <rekado@elephly.net>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] doc: Fix spelling.
Date: Thu, 27 Apr 2017 08:45:31 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <B7722F63-C9D5-459E-BCD5-343AF994271B@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20170427152825.22619-1-rekado@elephly.net>

Hi Ricardo!

On April 27, 2017 8:28:25 AM PDT, Ricardo Wurmus <rekado@elephly.net> wrote:
>* doc/cuirass.texi (Introduction): Fix typo and use American English
>spelling.
>---
> doc/cuirass.texi | 4 ++--
> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
>diff --git a/doc/cuirass.texi b/doc/cuirass.texi
>index e5f29a6..ff5f7b0 100644
>--- a/doc/cuirass.texi
>+++ b/doc/cuirass.texi
>@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Reference sections:
> @dfn{Cuirass} is a general-purpose build automation server that checks
> out source files from @acronym{VCS, Version Control System}
> repositories, executes a @dfn{build job}, and notifies the results of
>-that job.  A build job consists of a combinaison of tasks such as
>+that job.  A build job consists of a combination of tasks such as
> compiling source code to binary code and running automated tests.
> Notification is achieved by using a database that stores the build
>results associated with an HTTP server that provides a convenient way
>to
>@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ basis of the @dfn{Continuous integration} practice.
>@command{cuirass} acts as a daemon polling @acronym{VCS, version
>control
> system} repositories for changes, and evaluating a derivation when
> something has changed (@pxref{Derivations, Derivations,, guix, Guix}).
>-As a final step the derivation is realised and the result of that
>build
>+As a final step the derivation is realized and the result of that

Earlier we used *results* (plural). I think both are OK but we should harmonize.

>build
> allows you to know if the job succeed or not.

succeeded

> 
> What is actually done by @command{cuirass} is specified in a @dfn{job

The rest LGTM.

  reply	other threads:[~2017-04-27 16:58 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2017-04-27 15:28 [PATCH] doc: Fix spelling Ricardo Wurmus
2017-04-27 15:45 ` Maxim Cournoyer [this message]
2017-05-02 12:43 ` Ludovic Courtès
2017-05-02 12:58 ` ng0
2017-05-02 13:28   ` Ricardo Wurmus

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