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Subject: bug#22546: Download-Page is "hiding" what the options actually are
Date: Mon, 08 Feb 2016 15:06:44 +0100
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To: Mathieu Lirzin <mthl@gnu.org>
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Mathieu Lirzin <mthl@gnu.org> skribis:

> What about replacing these?
>
> As of version 0.9.0, the Guix System Distribution can be installed...
>
>   =E2=80=9CAs of version 0.9.0, the Guix System Distribution (GuixSD) is =
an
>   incarnation of the GNU operating system which can be installed...=E2=80=
=9D
>
> USB installer of the Guix System Distribution.
>
>   =E2=80=9CUSB installer of the GNU/Linux Guix System Distribution.=E2=80=
=9D

Sounds good to me, and hopefully clearer indeed.  Feel free to push.

Thank you,
Ludo=E2=80=99.