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Resent-From: "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" Original-Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-CC: guix-patches@gnu.org Resent-Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 21:07:01 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: followup 72439 X-GNU-PR-Package: guix-patches X-GNU-PR-Keywords: patch To: Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?= Cc: Maxim Cournoyer , Matthew Trzcinski , 72439-done@debbugs.gnu.org Received: via spool by 72439-done@debbugs.gnu.org id=D72439.172384237728109 (code D ref 72439); Fri, 16 Aug 2024 21:07:01 +0000 Received: (at 72439-done) by debbugs.gnu.org; 16 Aug 2024 21:06:17 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:52988 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1sf49I-0007JI-SV for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 17:06:17 -0400 Received: from relay.yourmailgateway.de ([188.68.63.170]:45817) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1sf49G-0007JA-H2 for 72439-done@debbugs.gnu.org; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 17:06:15 -0400 Received: from mors-relay8203.netcup.net (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mors-relay8203.netcup.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4Wlvf71BQGz8bWt; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 21:05:35 +0000 (UTC) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=pelzflorian.de; s=key2; t=1723842335; bh=sTIkejShtR6eXh5TSSXOL50zsDr8e/uXM3XUUgSA/pQ=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:From; b=hdz4RQXIJ5LaxUZ83e6MI/J5VIuX8y+egeMMJamV5hPfV2cYBnFV6mM90lwJCe+Ce 1/H2xR7mkFT41CtV9pSQguLoyM4hhL6dWEX0SFK+xi97rZf/qZpo93XMZDMXWj7UAh Bkz0CbymaG0L+jiPRjOCS6ibI0xHcYvDaT8b5n5zccgnP955i8g6zDRgCL2L07zGUa 0Zt8ouxN9k6zXq2rZ/YVt0AmKCeg/kAbyIjgXZqJ5f+7zjGlgIQabgmst0pgm79X4R 3/Xu1r2A3imxnr7IhQR7zwBEZR84ojqWfTwwgzG3r+5Q2HCt+bMA37RmR/8XakomNl NVZUZx/3MSVqA== Received: from policy02-mors.netcup.net (unknown [46.38.225.35]) by mors-relay8203.netcup.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4Wlvf70TmCz8bPq; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 21:05:35 +0000 (UTC) Received: from mxe217.netcup.net (unknown [10.243.12.53]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by policy02-mors.netcup.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4Wlvf54lS9z8scM; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 23:05:33 +0200 (CEST) Received: from florianhp (ipb2186896.dynamic.kabel-deutschland.de [178.24.104.150]) by mxe217.netcup.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id BE8C98412E; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 23:05:25 +0200 (CEST) From: "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" In-Reply-To: <8734n4788z.fsf@gnu.org> ("Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?="'s message of "Fri, 16 Aug 2024 18:17:00 +0200") References: <16e8cb82047987725668c1b493e4bde392779371.1722671885.git.pelzflorian@pelzflorian.de> <8734n4788z.fsf@gnu.org> Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 23:05:25 +0200 Message-ID: <87wmkgyy96.fsf@pelzflorian.de> User-Agent: Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: BE8C98412E X-Rspamd-Server: rspamd-worker-8404 X-NC-CID: ZmB8ASy79LXUJSJ5e2ZZ3EIIILnwtijdIShje0MC51J2omEeXIoEXS9P X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-BeenThere: guix-patches@gnu.org List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Country: US X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-Migadu-Queue-Id: 73A746E12E X-Migadu-Scanner: mx13.migadu.com X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -9.01 X-Spam-Score: -9.01 X-TUID: rglc3pWozefk Hi Ludo, I pushed all three of your reported typos: "the", Oxford comma and chroots. Pushed as follow-up commit 91cf240308def2fed3b8649f5e98891171327c78 Ludovic Court=C3=A8s writes: >> +During the installation, the @dfn{build daemon} that must be running > > s/the// (I think?) Yes, because the reader might visit ``Setting Up the Daemon'' much later than =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D installation, no definite article is better. Regards, Florian