From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Nikita Karetnikov Subject: Re: Guix paper Date: Sat, 18 May 2013 22:25:31 +0400 Message-ID: <87vc6gp2lg.fsf@karetnikov.org> References: <87vc8ppry6.fsf@gnu.org> <877gk8dejh.fsf@gnu.org> <87vc6g1hzd.fsf@gnu.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="=-=-="; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature" Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([208.118.235.92]:36397) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1UdlmF-0005qx-4e for bug-guix@gnu.org; Sat, 18 May 2013 14:22:45 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1UdlmB-000629-Uc for bug-guix@gnu.org; Sat, 18 May 2013 14:22:43 -0400 In-Reply-To: <87vc6g1hzd.fsf@gnu.org> ("Ludovic =?utf-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s=22'?= =?utf-8?Q?s?= message of "Sat, 18 May 2013 16:27:02 +0200") List-Id: Bug reports for GNU Guix List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-guix-bounces+gcggb-bug-guix=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: bug-guix-bounces+gcggb-bug-guix=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: Ludovic =?utf-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?= Cc: bug-guix@gnu.org --=-=-= Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable > I=E2=80=99ve pushed the paper under the new guix/maintenance.git reposito= ry > [0]. I've spotted some typos. > (p [This section describe the functional package management > paradigm and its implementation in Nix. It then shows how Guix differs, > and what the rationale is.]) The word "describe" should be changed to "describes." > (p [Our goals when designing Guix was to provide interfaces > ranging from Nix's low-level primitives such as ,(tt > [derivation]) to high-level package declarations. "Our goal" instead of "our goals." > Input file names are similarly reified through the ,(tt [%build-inputs]) > variable (not shown here.) Change to "variable (not shown here)." > As an additional constraint, this extra layer should be efficient in > space and time: package management tools need to be able to load and > traverse a distribution consisting in thousands of packages.]) Replace "consisting in" with "consisting of." --=-=-= Content-Type: application/pgp-signature -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.10 (GNU/Linux) iQIcBAEBAgAGBQJRl8elAAoJEM+IQzI9IQ38bDoP/juZcwoivjUrsBXK7YFsRtoU eJxOIQHx0oQVaVpRb3dg8nqTWrc7gzHDem02Ql/1WPo45ynxLQ0C8nVEVlPnCP7A eqzL7V/PaftvUtZ/65un88OMDlli2c7ei4trSNnugAof6uBwjlcuOvjiIevsQGHz +isgB0nrbQMZIeWVskTQPHcs7Z7qphiB7n1WCna/mnK9BbzSJxPX6FKaATmVOODI IYlmFYe+GSUXR5sHyyBlZxkQ4fnRp3jXKNcpsJXB8U421Qt8p5vJCtd+7yUEZsIz 7WH6/jVVp8OZ6qknCsr1XMIyjuBLHXclceII+0xY19yZbLX/GFSsPPs5tFGHAsWl qQoclG0QX4Lzti9t6valNbBOL6vPqxL/WZTHW1GTFsxy24Db/5XtgOh8AaMF6ZAA /Tq7RWOWQmuRmHt8bCTtelzUQbflOiPNmxxEpjxnuATXY+RxSoRcz3bMzzhttZk8 oRlVb2g1ocxbugHTW9Nh0cA7uTMWCCFXUqgkh+rUuh8ZuHWVS0waxxfS5aPOrKtv +UsWVnS43I4QlgRdRyYt5A7zVIlEy+1AQzmFZL2lTuqr3xryurEIL59GJDrIQMMa WJY5N9UmGeJWVHgvtWoBNwejX+T7/jvqmJJ8NHfz0tybL7gdQUHGvJzJ/qj7Ojai ma7UWMzG/LwoAb9lYOGP =2Ksy -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-=-=--