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From: "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" Gcc: nnfolder+archive:sent.2024-02 --text follows this line-- This rewrite makes Guix System more approachable. Thank you for the tip with =E2=80=9Cguix style -f=E2=80=9D! Ludovic Court=C3=A8s writes: > * doc/guix.texi (Getting Started with the System): New node. > (After System Installation): Refer to it. Remove note about =E2=80=98sud= o guix > pull=E2=80=99. I was alarmed that you remove the note about sudo, but indeed you just moved it and not removed. > (Getting Started): Refer to it. Remove note about =E2=80=98guix system r= oll-back=E2=80=99. As above. > +@quotation Note > +You can store your system configuration file anywhere you like---it > +doesn't have to be at @file{/etc/config.scm}. It's a good idea to keep > +it under version control, for instance in a Git repository. > +@end quotation Could you add a reference @uref{https://git-scm.com/book/en/, Git} like we do in the =E2=80=9CInvoking guix pull=E2=80=9D section? > +The @emph{entire} configuration of the system---user accounts, system > +services, timezone, locale settings---is declared this file, which > +follows this template: is declared *in* this file > @node Using the Configuration System > @section Using the Configuration System >=20=20 > +The previous section showed the overall workflow you would follow when > +administrating a Guix System machine (@pxref{Getting Started with the =E2=80=9Cadministering=E2=80=9D seems more correct than =E2=80=9Cadministra= ting=E2=80=9D. I=E2=80=99m not a native English speaker though. > The operating system is configured by providing an > @code{operating-system} declaration in a file that can then be passed to > -the @command{guix system} command (@pxref{Invoking guix system}). A > -simple setup, with the default Linux-Libre > -kernel, initial RAM disk, and a couple of system services added to those > +the @command{guix system} command, as we've seen before (@pxref{Invoking > +guix system}). [=E2=80=A6] Could you move the (@pxref{Invoking guix system}) before the =E2=80=9C, as = we've seen before=E2=80=9D? Otherwise it appears as if =E2=80=9Cbefore=E2=80=9D = refers to =E2=80=9CInvoking guix system=E2=80=9D. Regards, Florian