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Subject: Re: Talk for the GHM
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Andreas Enge <andreas@enge.fr> skribis:

> Sounds good to me, with the first paragraph maybe a bit heavy on buzzword=
s.

Heh.  :-)

I wanted it to be high-level and concise, and ended up reusing that ELS
intro.  I think I=E2=80=99ll go with this one, because holiday time has com=
e.  ;-)

> Am Mittwoch, 17. Juli 2013 schrieb Ludovic Court=C3=A8s:
>>   This talk will reflect on a year of development, showing how far we=E2=
=80=99ve
>>   got toward this mission,
>
> "come" instead of "got", I think; I would also continue with infinitives:=
=20
> "show" instead of "showing".

Agreed.

>>   and showing off with a demo.
>
> "give" instead of "show off with", or "finish with"?

I really meant that we=E2=80=99ll be showing off.  :-)

Thanks for your input,
Ludo=E2=80=99.