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Subject: Re: [PATCH] gnu: Add rpcbind
Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2016 22:25:36 +0200
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John Darrington <john@darrington.wattle.id.au> skribis:

> From: John Darrington <jmd@gnu.org>
>
> * gnu/packages/linux.scm (rpcbind): New variable.
> +    (synopsis "A server to convert RPC program numbers into universal ad=
dresses")
                  ^
If I were =E2=80=98guix lint=E2=80=99 I=E2=80=99d complain about that.  ;-)

What about: =E2=80=9CConvert ONC=C2=A0RPC program numbers to addresses=E2=
=80=9D?

> +    (description
> +     "The rpcbind utility is a server that converts RPC program numbers =
into=20
> +universal addresses.")

Maybe: =E2=80=9CThe @command{rpcbind} utility is a directory server that co=
nvert
ONC=C2=A0RPC program numbers to IP addresses.=E2=80=9D

Otherwise LGTM, thank you!

Ludo=E2=80=99.