From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Roel Janssen Subject: [PATCH] doc: Small fixes for typos and missing words. Date: Wed, 30 Mar 2016 14:37:11 +0200 Message-ID: <87r3esrvk8.fsf@gnu.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="=-=-=" Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:39207) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1alFMs-0002Os-Rr for guix-devel@gnu.org; Wed, 30 Mar 2016 08:37:08 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1alFMn-000546-3S for guix-devel@gnu.org; Wed, 30 Mar 2016 08:37:02 -0400 Received: from fencepost.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::e]:59783) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1alFMm-000542-Vb for guix-devel@gnu.org; Wed, 30 Mar 2016 08:36:57 -0400 Received: from [143.121.239.252] (port=2865 helo=roel-tp) by fencepost.gnu.org with esmtpsa (TLS1.2:RSA_AES_128_CBC_SHA1:128) (Exim 4.82) (envelope-from ) id 1alFMm-0007lG-F8 for guix-devel@gnu.org; Wed, 30 Mar 2016 08:36:56 -0400 List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: guix-devel@gnu.org --=-=-= Content-Type: text/x-patch Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=0001-doc-Small-fixes-for-typos-and-missing-words.patch >From 467315651e27c3ce3059b9fca38494879de50e5e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Roel Janssen Date: Wed, 30 Mar 2016 14:27:52 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] doc: Small fixes for typos and missing words. * doc/guix.texi (The Store Monad): Add a dot at the end of a sentence. (The Store Monad): Add "are" to make a complete sentence. (G-Expressions): Fix typo. --- doc/guix.texi | 54 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi index 1a7f188..2407a41 100644 --- a/doc/guix.texi +++ b/doc/guix.texi @@ -3245,7 +3291,7 @@ provides a framework for working with @dfn{monads}, and a particularly useful monad for our uses, the @dfn{store monad}. Monads are a construct that allows two things: associating ``context'' with values (in our case, the context is the store), and building sequences of -computations (here computations include accesses to the store.) Values +computations (here computations include accesses to the store.). Values in a monad---values that carry this additional context---are called @dfn{monadic values}; procedures that return such values are called @dfn{monadic procedures}. @@ -3274,7 +3320,7 @@ as a monadic function: #$output)))) @end example -There several things to note in the second version: the @code{store} +There are several things to note in the second version: the @code{store} parameter is now implicit and is ``threaded'' in the calls to the @code{package->derivation} and @code{gexp->derivation} monadic procedures, and the monadic value returned by @code{package->derivation} @@ -3541,7 +3587,7 @@ S-expressions adapted to build expressions. G-expressions, or @code{ungexp}, and @code{ungexp-splicing} (or simply: @code{#~}, @code{#$}, and @code{#$@@}), which are comparable to @code{quasiquote}, @code{unquote}, and @code{unquote-splicing}, -respectivel (@pxref{Expression Syntax, @code{quasiquote},, guile, +respectively (@pxref{Expression Syntax, @code{quasiquote},, guile, GNU Guile Reference Manual}). However, there are major differences: @itemize -- 2.5.5 --=-=-= Content-Type: text/plain Dear Guix, I noticed some typos and/or missing words when reading parts of the manual. Instead of leaving it be, I attached a patch to fix them. I don't know how my commit message should look like in this case, so please let me know when it is wrong. Kind regards, Roel Janssen --=-=-=--