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In addition to what others have >> already pointed out, I've got few readability suggestions, reading this = as a >> layperson :) (Questions are intentended to be rhetorical, to illustrate >> where a layperson might have questions or be confused.) >=20=20 > Thanks so much for you proof-reading! I'll update and push a new patch! >=20=20 >> Also, consider referencing relevant sections of the manual, such as >>=20 >> https://guix.gnu.org/manual/en/html_node/Manual-Installation.html >>=20 >> so users know where to find more detailed information. >=20=20 > That is an awesome idea! I will do so! My main question would be: what do you think is not covered in the =E2=80=9CManual Installation=E2=80=9D section? That section covers full disk encryption and other things you propose, such as partitioning, downloading the ISO, authenticating it, changing the keyboard layout, etc. >From a maintenance perspective, it does not seem reasonable to maintain to similar pieces of documentation on these matters. From a user perspective, it could be confusing or downright deceiving if one of these two documents is out of date or erroneous. All in all, for the topic we=E2=80=99re discussing, I=E2=80=99d suggest con= solidating existing material instead of writing new material. WDYT? Thanks, Ludo=E2=80=99.