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Thank you, Luis. Some comments: There are tab characters, which do not necessarily have the same width in all editors. I use in my .gitconfig file a modified pager command that makes tabs visible and especially ugly: [core] editor =3D emacs -nw pager =3D sed 's/\t/.ACHTUNGACHTUNGHIERISTEINTABSTOPP /g' | less -R This makes them easy to notice and avoid. It is a bad default that Emacs produces them. Please untabify. And if you use Emacs, in your .emacs configuration file, (setq-default indent-tabs-mode nil) > - ,(G_ (manual-link-yellow "define packages" > - (G_ "en") > - (G_ "Defining-Packages.html"))) > + `(p > + "GNU Guix is a " > + ,(G_ (link-yellow #:label "package manager" > + #:url (manual-devel-url "Package-Management= .h=3D > tml"))) For translatability, the manual-devel-url must be used like ,(G_ (link-yellow #:label "package manager" #:language (G_ "en") #:url (G_ (manual-devel-url "Package-Management.html")))) so translators have a chance to reference non-"en" manuals and other section names. There also should be a TRANSLATORS comment before top-level G_ like - ;; TRANSLATORS: Package Management, Features and Using the - ;; Configuration System are section names in the English (en) - ;; manual. > + " for GNU/Linux systems. It is designed to give users " > + ,(G_ `(b "more control")) ; TODO: Link to relevant documenta= ti=3D > on. > + " over their general purpose and specialized computing \ general-purpose > [=E2=80=A6] > + (div > + ,(G_ '(h2 "Give Users Control")) > + ,(G_ '(p "Users can manage their own packages independently \ > +from each other, without superuser privileges.")) Please make clear this is about =E2=80=9Cusers on the same machine=E2=80=9D. If you agree with these changes and noone else has comments, I can fix the TRANSLATORS and untabify and then push to guix-artwork. Great work; great design! Regards, Florian