From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Ricardo Wurmus Subject: Re: [PATCH 03/19] gnu: Add r-dbi. Date: Mon, 14 Sep 2015 12:46:17 +0200 Message-ID: <87h9mx8eiu.fsf@mdc-berlin.de> References: Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:51451) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1ZbRHH-0003YL-Nc for guix-devel@gnu.org; Mon, 14 Sep 2015 06:46:29 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1ZbRHE-0000Ca-62 for guix-devel@gnu.org; Mon, 14 Sep 2015 06:46:27 -0400 Received: from venus.bbbm.mdc-berlin.de ([141.80.25.30]:49655) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1ZbRHD-0000Am-Tr for guix-devel@gnu.org; Mon, 14 Sep 2015 06:46:24 -0400 In-Reply-To: List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: Vicente Vera Cc: guix-devel@gnu.org Vicente Vera writes: > * gnu/packages/statistics.scm (r-dbi): New variable. [...] > + (synopsis "R Database Interface") Please use lower case here. > + (description > + "A database interface (DBI) definition for communication between R > +and relational database management systems. All classes in this > +package are virtual and need to be extended by the various R/DBMS > +implementations.") Please use two spaces after each sentence. Also, please change the beginning of the first sentence fragment so that it becomes a full sentence. E.g. s/A/The DBI package provides a/ ~~ Ricardo