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dkim=fail ("headers rsa verify failed") header.d=gmail.com header.s=20221208 header.b=R0KgCdRD; dmarc=fail reason="SPF not aligned (relaxed)" header.from=gmail.com (policy=none); spf=pass (aspmx1.migadu.com: domain of "guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org" designates 209.51.188.17 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom="guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org" X-TUID: RjXXySfAOO8u Hi, On ven., 21 avril 2023 at 10:21, Nicolas Goaziou w= rote: >> The new phase that is inserted is written as an anonymous procedure, >> -introduced with @code{lambda*}; it honors the @code{outputs} parameter >> -we have seen before. @xref{Build Utilities}, for more about the helpers >> -used by this phase, and for more examples of @code{modify-phases}. >> +introduced with @code{lambda*}. @xref{Build Utilities}, for more about >> +the helpers used by this phase, and for more examples of >> +@code{modify-phases}. > > I think it still makes sense to refer to `inputs'; it could be > unsettling otherwise. Maybe something along those lines: > > ... introduced with @code{lambda*}; it looks for the @file{xmllint} > executable in a @file{"/bin"} directory among package's inputs > (@pxref{package Reference}). It also honors the @code{outputs} > parameter we have seen before@xref{Build Utilities}, for more... This tweak looks better to me. Well, Bruno could you send a v3? Or Nicolas, could you amend the patch and directly apply it? (Note the typo in =C2=AB before@xref{Build Utilities} =C2=BB, I guess.) Cheers, simon