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Resent-From: Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?= Original-Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-CC: guix-patches@gnu.org Resent-Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2024 11:32:02 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: followup 69302 X-GNU-PR-Package: guix-patches X-GNU-PR-Keywords: patch To: "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" Cc: 69302@debbugs.gnu.org Received: via spool by 69302-submit@debbugs.gnu.org id=B69302.170877426228351 (code B ref 69302); Sat, 24 Feb 2024 11:32:02 +0000 Received: (at 69302) by debbugs.gnu.org; 24 Feb 2024 11:31:02 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:49321 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1rdqFA-0007N7-9e for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Sat, 24 Feb 2024 06:31:01 -0500 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([209.51.188.92]:37306) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1rdqF4-0007Mf-Uu for 69302@debbugs.gnu.org; Sat, 24 Feb 2024 06:30:59 -0500 Received: from fencepost.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::e]) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1rdqEa-0004mH-P8; Sat, 24 Feb 2024 06:30:25 -0500 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gnu.org; s=fencepost-gnu-org; h=MIME-Version:Date:References:In-Reply-To:Subject:To: From; bh=BHu6iA3HyA9/A6h3TVGJNVWsLAwLfZ33FzDU7Laq9v8=; b=cCoQXnBm5rQWtof4T2d8 ya/lm26sgWS8e30GogkTmx0ZIlK+DulZKTcWJhg8eWhnlLfZtvAUm9qCTuDqLrhpx4BRc2sJRF7Va NcDOdfBJPblVjswVz5/ND2IFvRGBfg2sA52drWlF9XDcZ7TECqBWBlas/0Y3RLZaXM2q2PMXQeX7A KgoAb7OW1K8qkmWj9Phd5FSBn0HwBiS1HZjif/dnaZbpKpfZCBJA4zua3zYphGJxbR3ZmNf7zdE/U /liDMImeFGWkxgPnEBEMXZvDYYaNbKNC1qwBADZvIUncsGUwVq4FK24iLEzy3fqqjAs9syZPxSF5g F6R46Jfg2/7QZg==; From: Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?= In-Reply-To: <87v86ge2p8.fsf@pelzflorian.de> (pelzflorian@pelzflorian.de's message of "Thu, 22 Feb 2024 20:09:07 +0100") References: <87v86ge2p8.fsf@pelzflorian.de> X-URL: http://www.fdn.fr/~lcourtes/ X-Revolutionary-Date: Sextidi 6 =?UTF-8?Q?Vent=C3=B4se?= an 232 de la =?UTF-8?Q?R=C3=A9volution,?= jour de l'Asaret X-PGP-Key-ID: 0x090B11993D9AEBB5 X-PGP-Key: http://www.fdn.fr/~lcourtes/ludovic.asc X-PGP-Fingerprint: 3CE4 6455 8A84 FDC6 9DB4 0CFB 090B 1199 3D9A EBB5 X-OS: x86_64-pc-linux-gnu Date: Sat, 24 Feb 2024 12:30:17 +0100 Message-ID: <87frxicd6e.fsf@gnu.org> User-Agent: Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-BeenThere: guix-patches@gnu.org List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-Migadu-Country: US X-Migadu-Scanner: mx10.migadu.com X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -5.31 X-Spam-Score: -5.31 X-Migadu-Queue-Id: A8F8171D26 X-TUID: YFfivraCpGIx Hi! "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" skribis: > This rewrite makes Guix System more approachable. Thank you for the tip > with =E2=80=9Cguix style -f=E2=80=9D! :-) > Ludovic Court=C3=A8s writes: >> * doc/guix.texi (Getting Started with the System): New node. >> (After System Installation): Refer to it. Remove note about =E2=80=98su= do guix >> pull=E2=80=99. > > I was alarmed that you remove the note about sudo, but indeed you just > moved it and not removed. > >> (Getting Started): Refer to it. Remove note about =E2=80=98guix system = roll-back=E2=80=99. > > As above. Right, I=E2=80=99ll clarify that in the commit log. > Could you add a reference @uref{https://git-scm.com/book/en/, Git} like > we do in the =E2=80=9CInvoking guix pull=E2=80=9D section? Sure, will do. >> +The previous section showed the overall workflow you would follow when >> +administrating a Guix System machine (@pxref{Getting Started with the > > =E2=80=9Cadministering=E2=80=9D seems more correct than =E2=80=9Cadminist= rating=E2=80=9D. I=E2=80=99m not a > native English speaker though. Probably, I=E2=80=99m always hesitant. >> The operating system is configured by providing an >> @code{operating-system} declaration in a file that can then be passed to >> -the @command{guix system} command (@pxref{Invoking guix system}). A >> -simple setup, with the default Linux-Libre >> -kernel, initial RAM disk, and a couple of system services added to those >> +the @command{guix system} command, as we've seen before (@pxref{Invoking >> +guix system}). [=E2=80=A6] > > Could you move the (@pxref{Invoking guix system}) before the =E2=80=9C, a= s we've > seen before=E2=80=9D? Otherwise it appears as if =E2=80=9Cbefore=E2=80= =9D refers to =E2=80=9CInvoking > guix system=E2=80=9D. I like to avoid parenthetical expressions in the middle of a sentence, as it breaks the flow, but in this case you=E2=80=99re right that it makes = the text ambiguous. I=E2=80=99ll change it. Thanks! Ludo=E2=80=99.