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From: Ricardo Wurmus <rekado@elephly.net>
To: guix-devel <guix-devel@gnu.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter.
Date: Sun, 20 Sep 2015 17:49:44 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <87eght5bvr.fsf@elephly.net> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <8761377ct3.fsf@elephly.net>

On IRC I was told that the description wasn’t quite as neutral as it
should have been, so here’s another attempt:

       "M.A.R.S. is a 2D space shooter with pretty visual effects and
attractive physics.  Players can battle each other or computer controlled
enemies in different game modes such as space ball, death match, team death
match, cannon keep, and grave-itation pit."

* “pretty visual effects” rather than “awesome visual effects”.
* “attractive physics” — I could not think of a more appropriate term; it
  surely is not “realistic”.
* “exciting game modes” has become “different game modes such as ...”

What do you think?

~~ Ricardo

  parent reply	other threads:[~2015-09-20 15:49 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 18+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2015-09-18 19:25 [PATCH] Add MARS shooter Ricardo Wurmus
2015-09-19  8:25 ` Ricardo Wurmus
2015-09-19 15:44   ` Thompson, David
2015-09-19 20:06     ` Ricardo Wurmus
2015-09-19 20:33       ` Thompson, David
2015-09-20  7:51         ` Ricardo Wurmus
2015-09-20  9:46           ` Ricardo Wurmus
2015-09-25 22:30     ` Christopher Allan Webber
2015-09-26 13:04       ` Ludovic Courtès
2015-09-19 17:17 ` Eric Bavier
2015-09-20 10:08   ` Ricardo Wurmus
2015-09-20 16:30   ` Version strings for VCS snapshots Ludovic Courtès
2015-09-23  6:13     ` Ricardo Wurmus
2015-09-23 23:35     ` Mark H Weaver
2015-09-24  8:11       ` Andreas Enge
2015-09-24 11:12       ` Ludovic Courtès
2015-09-20 15:49 ` Ricardo Wurmus [this message]
2015-09-20 20:19   ` [PATCH] Add MARS shooter Eric Bavier

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