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Subject: [bug#28900] [PATCH] doc: Clarify description of etc-service-type.
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From: ludo@gnu.org (Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?=)
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Date: Thu, 19 Oct 2017 23:14:52 +0200
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To: Hartmut Goebel <h.goebel@crazy-compilers.com>
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Hi,

Hartmut Goebel <h.goebel@crazy-compilers.com> skribis:

> * doc/guix.texi (Service Reference): Update 'etc-service-type'
>   documentation.
> ---
>  doc/guix.texi | 3 ++-
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
> index b7f4f88f9..2fc98f0fe 100644
> --- a/doc/guix.texi
> +++ b/doc/guix.texi
> @@ -18605,7 +18605,8 @@ The boot script is what the initial RAM disk runs=
 when booting.
>  @end defvr
>=20=20
>  @defvr {Scheme Variable} etc-service-type
> -The type of the @file{/etc} service.  This service can be extended by
> +The type of the @file{/etc} service. This service is used to create
                                       ^
Please preserve space here (the convention is to have two spaces after
an end-of-sentence period.)

> +files under @file{/etc} and can be extended by
>  passing it name/file tuples such as:

LGTM, thanks!

Ludo=E2=80=99.