From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Chris Marusich Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix minor typos and add missing words. Date: Mon, 22 Feb 2016 23:01:20 -0800 Message-ID: <87a8mruczj.fsf@gmail.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="=-=-=" Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:46234) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1aY6yQ-0003Gn-Gb for guix-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 23 Feb 2016 02:01:35 -0500 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1aY6yK-0007Fr-N4 for guix-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 23 Feb 2016 02:01:30 -0500 Received: from mail-pf0-x22f.google.com ([2607:f8b0:400e:c00::22f]:35539) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1aY6yK-0007FV-Ab for guix-devel@gnu.org; Tue, 23 Feb 2016 02:01:24 -0500 Received: by mail-pf0-x22f.google.com with SMTP id c10so110679359pfc.2 for ; Mon, 22 Feb 2016 23:01:23 -0800 (PST) Received: from garuda ([2601:602:8100:9ee4:219:b9ff:fe7e:b4cd]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id cq9sm41613673pac.26.2016.02.22.23.01.21 for (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Mon, 22 Feb 2016 23:01:21 -0800 (PST) List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: guix-devel@gnu.org --=-=-= Content-Type: text/plain Hi, Thank you for the high quality documentation! Here's a patch to fix some minor typos in the manual. Since "git send-email" doesn't work yet out of the box on GuixSD (for me, at least), I've attached the patch by hand. Please let me know if anything needs to be changed. Best regards, Chris --=-=-= Content-Type: text/x-patch Content-Disposition: attachment; filename=0001-doc-Fix-minor-typos-and-add-missing-words.patch >From ed3770fbc5d14899831359925c127a0f6bebde68 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Chris Marusich Date: Mon, 22 Feb 2016 22:25:09 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] doc: Fix minor typos and add missing words. * doc/guix.texi (Shepherd Services): Add missing words. (Invoking guix system): Fix typo. (Service Types and Services): Fix typo. * doc/contributing.texi (Submitting Patches): Fix typo. --- doc/contributing.texi | 6 +++--- doc/guix.texi | 14 +++++++------- 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/contributing.texi b/doc/contributing.texi index 54fb23a..3dbd3db 100644 --- a/doc/contributing.texi +++ b/doc/contributing.texi @@ -315,6 +315,6 @@ extensions---or to the operating system kernel---e.g., reliance on @end enumerate -When posting a patch to the mailing list, use @samp{[PATCH] @dots{}} as a -subject. You may use your email client or the @command{git send-mail} -command. +When posting a patch to the mailing list, use @samp{[PATCH] @dots{}} as +a subject. You may use your email client or the @command{git +send-email} command. diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi index 51b0652..1bb44cb 100644 --- a/doc/guix.texi +++ b/doc/guix.texi @@ -9338,7 +9338,7 @@ guix system @var{options}@dots{} @var{action} @var{file} @var{file} must be the name of a file containing an @code{operating-system} declaration. @var{action} specifies how the -operating system is instantiate. Currently the following values are +operating system is instantiated. Currently the following values are supported: @table @code @@ -9804,7 +9804,7 @@ the composition of the extensions. Udev extensions are composed into a list of rules, but the udev service value is itself a @code{} record. So here, we -extend that record by appending the list of rules is contains to the +extend that record by appending the list of rules it contains to the list of contributed rules. @end table @@ -9998,11 +9998,11 @@ extend it by passing it lists of packages to add to the system profile. @cindex PID 1 @cindex init system -The @code{(gnu services shepherd)} provides a way to define services -managed by the GNU@tie{}Shepherd, which is GuixSD initialization -system---the first process that is started when the system boots, -aka. PID@tie{}1 (@pxref{Introduction,,, shepherd, The GNU Shepherd -Manual}). +The module @code{(gnu services shepherd)} provides a way to define +services managed by the GNU@tie{}Shepherd, which is the GuixSD +initialization system---the first process that is started when the +system boots, aka. PID@tie{}1 (@pxref{Introduction,,, shepherd, The GNU +Shepherd Manual}). Services in the Shepherd can depend on each other. For instance, the SSH daemon may need to be started after the syslog daemon has been -- 2.5.0 --=-=-=--