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Resent-From: "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" Original-Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-CC: guix-patches@gnu.org Resent-Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 18:44:01 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: followup 72439 X-GNU-PR-Package: guix-patches X-GNU-PR-Keywords: patch To: Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?= Cc: Maxim Cournoyer , Matthew Trzcinski , 72439@debbugs.gnu.org Received: via spool by 72439-submit@debbugs.gnu.org id=B72439.172383382014198 (code B ref 72439); Fri, 16 Aug 2024 18:44:01 +0000 Received: (at 72439) by debbugs.gnu.org; 16 Aug 2024 18:43:40 +0000 Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:52883 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1sf1vI-0003gw-3l for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 14:43:40 -0400 Received: from relay.yourmailgateway.de ([188.68.63.98]:34787) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1sf1vE-0003gk-Uf for 72439@debbugs.gnu.org; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 14:43:38 -0400 Received: from mors-relay-2501.netcup.net (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mors-relay-2501.netcup.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4WlrTY4fL5z61xJ; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 20:42:57 +0200 (CEST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=pelzflorian.de; s=key2; t=1723833777; bh=VsCTae6o+jdpgFGjDT9+nJ9O0SKYMCINehjoKp7ce+I=; h=From:To:Cc:Subject:In-Reply-To:References:Date:From; b=WozywdWmIEm2nxvuLRxpRSUBWTtMio0k5LcnWIxdnRWzhiLCVkDCJ5y8z2TdzlY14 gO/MMHu1WkawJJDILCCThL7b2SSXwS0OGivnx/TocgxLRF+2myUsYO8TF2sbu5SNPi I03HGCjnMYd0gtYqBluV4QCKOIHJyudEbkAiObHmHZlSkr5UFEJdFShKehXQWfU8wt 0hmjtOdtClOFpMKKIXNVuSZnA7IK/RuGHdqk825Uz3ZOvQu6Hsd4JyEGYbA/T3dL/4 yYEUfZX42IGg5sYFuh967cdnZyVdYsaQXY5BDDoXie7O6RawEklPzyuc845vb3JHuV ByoTYxWSg0YBw== Received: from policy01-mors.netcup.net (unknown [46.38.225.35]) by mors-relay-2501.netcup.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4WlrTY3vTsz4xFL; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 20:42:57 +0200 (CEST) X-Virus-Scanned: Debian amavisd-new at policy01-mors.netcup.net Received: from mxe217.netcup.net (unknown [10.243.12.53]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by policy01-mors.netcup.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4WlrTX6mHkz8t3y; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 20:42:56 +0200 (CEST) Received: from florianhp (ipb2186896.dynamic.kabel-deutschland.de [178.24.104.150]) by mxe217.netcup.net (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 5F4B2840BE; Fri, 16 Aug 2024 20:42:49 +0200 (CEST) From: "pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)" In-Reply-To: <8734n4788z.fsf@gnu.org> ("Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?="'s message of "Fri, 16 Aug 2024 18:17:00 +0200") References: <16e8cb82047987725668c1b493e4bde392779371.1722671885.git.pelzflorian@pelzflorian.de> <8734n4788z.fsf@gnu.org> Date: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 20:42:49 +0200 Message-ID: <878qwwb97a.fsf@pelzflorian.de> User-Agent: Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 5F4B2840BE X-Rspamd-Server: rspamd-worker-8404 X-NC-CID: gHV4tb6nidjCnRuIrMDOeHPDUlvU4MDo/zPuaSqYYFqCmayJ8yy+cvd0 X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-BeenThere: guix-patches@gnu.org List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-patches-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Country: US X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-Spam-Score: -9.00 X-Migadu-Queue-Id: 7BAB0ABC5 X-Migadu-Scanner: mx10.migadu.com X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -9.00 X-TUID: KK0V8MSxKXRL Hi Ludo. Ohh sorry, I pushed this already when it had one review and a week was over. Ludovic Court=C3=A8s writes: > Florian Pelz skribis: > >> * doc/guix.texi (Setting Up the Daemon): Specify intended audience. >> >> Change-Id: I784c5f720aa87bddb6455e42181a1e9de5d7ec9a > > Good idea. > >> +During the installation, the @dfn{build daemon} that must be running > > s/the// (I think?) IMHO a definite article is warranted, because the installation was described in the previous section. >> +However, some of us have reason to replace outdated daemon versions, >> +tweak it, perform builds on other machines (@pxref{Daemon Offload >> +Setup}) or start it manually in special environments like Chroots > > I=E2=80=99d add a comma before =E2=80=9Cor=E2=80=9D, An Oxford comma is often used and sometimes not in the manual. Such as > 22.6 Alternative Setups > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D >=20 > Alternative setups than Emacs may let you work on Guix with a similar > development experience and they might work better with the tools you > currently use or help you make the transition to Emacs. or > 22.8.6 Cyclic Module Dependencies > --------------------------------- > [=E2=80=A6] > Care would need to be taken to ensure the above procedure is only > ever used in a package delayed fields or within another procedure also > not called at the top level. We could enforce one unified style, it just is less natural to me. > and s/Chroots/``chroots''/ > > Otherwise LGTM, thanks! > > Ludo=E2=80=99. Yes, I will prepare a follow-up patch for chroots. Regards, Florian