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Subject: Re: 01/01: doc: Typos and small stylistic changes.
Date: Tue, 15 Mar 2016 17:20:43 +0100
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Andreas Enge <andreas@enge.fr> skribis:

> On Wed, Mar 09, 2016 at 12:02:44PM +0300, Alex Kost wrote:
>> I think this should be rephrased, because after this change, makeinfo
>> complains:
>>   ./doc/guix.texi:5937: warning: `.' or `,' must follow @xref
>> And in the generated guix.info there is a dot before "and".
>
> Fixed in commit 6e6a04016d292991dcae02bbbe5a3bde616b9092, thanks for
> the report!


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-@xref{Invoking guix system} and
-@file{gnu/system/install.scm} in the source tree for more information
+Have a look at @file{gnu/system/install.scm} in the source tree,
+and see also @ref{Invoking guix system} for more information
 about the installation image.

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No big deal, but in general I think it=E2=80=99s best to just leave the com=
ma
after the closing brace.  Quoth the manual (info "(texinfo) @ref"):

     The '@ref' command can tempt writers to express themselves in a
  manner that is suitable for a printed manual but looks awkward in the
  Info format.  [=E2=80=A6]

Ludo=E2=80=99.

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