From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: ludo@gnu.org (Ludovic =?utf-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?=) Subject: Re: [PATCH] gnu: Add tlp. Date: Fri, 10 Feb 2017 16:38:01 +0100 Message-ID: <8737fmcazq.fsf@gnu.org> References: <20170131210118.3128-1-m.othacehe@gmail.com> <20170210062609.GA18340@jocasta.intra> <87r336dxdo.fsf@gnu.org> <20170210141414.GA22019@jocasta.intra> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:34249) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1ccDGz-0004LH-2F for guix-devel@gnu.org; Fri, 10 Feb 2017 10:38:10 -0500 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1ccDGu-0004Dq-4I for guix-devel@gnu.org; Fri, 10 Feb 2017 10:38:09 -0500 In-Reply-To: <20170210141414.GA22019@jocasta.intra> (John Darrington's message of "Fri, 10 Feb 2017 15:14:14 +0100") List-Id: "Development of GNU Guix and the GNU System distribution." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+gcggd-guix-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: "Guix-devel" To: John Darrington Cc: guix-devel@gnu.org John Darrington skribis: > On Fri, Feb 10, 2017 at 01:49:07PM +0100, Ludovic Court??s wrote: > John Darrington skribis: >=20=20=20=20=20=20 > > On Tue, Jan 31, 2017 at 10:01:18PM +0100, Mathieu Othacehe wrote: > > > > + (home-page "http://linrunner.de/en/tlp/tlp.html") > > + (synopsis "Power management tool for Linux") > > + (description "TLP is a power management tool for Linux. = It comes with > > > > Shouldn't we changed "Linux" to "Linux based GNU systems" or somet= hing similar? >=20=20=20=20=20=20 > It uses interfaces specific to the kernel Linux so I think it???s > technically correct. > > But grammatically incorrect. Specifically, the preposition "for" is wron= g. > It implies that the package provides some feature that Linux can use. Whe= reas > the opposite is true. > > A more gramatically correct sentance might say "power management tool usi= ng=20 > Linux kernel features". Right, or =E2=80=9Cfor Linux-based operating systems.=E2=80=9D I=E2=80=99m happy if you make one of these changes. :-) > But I wonder why we even mention it? I mean if a package happens to use = libc, we don't > say in the package description or sysnopsis "an editor which makes using = the=20 > fopen, and fclose calls of glibc". I think we mention it because while GuixSD uses glibc, it may be able to use different kernels in the future. Ludo=E2=80=99.