Hi Julien,

On Sun, 28 Feb 2021 at 03:29, Julien Lepiller <julien@lepiller.eu> wrote:
> Of course I forgot to attach the patches ^^'

Awesome!


> +(define-public camlboot
> +  (let ((commit "506280c6e0813e0e794988151a8e46be55373ebc")
> +        (revision "0"))
> +    (package
> +      (name "camlboot")
> +      (version (git-version "0.0.0" revision commit))
> +      (source (origin
> +                (method git-fetch)
> +                (uri (git-reference
> +                       (url "https://github.com/Ekdohibs/camlboot")
> +                       (commit commit)
> +                       (recursive? #t)))

Is the indentation right?  Below with my config (which could be wrong).

[...]

> +      (synopsis "OCaml bootstrap")

I have no opinion but elsewhere it also appears «Bootstrap XXX».

> +      (description "OCaml is written in OCaml. Its sources contain a pre-compiled
> +bytecode version of ocamlc and ocamllex that are used to build the
> next version

Maybe @code{ocamlc} and @code{ocamlex}

> +of the compiler. Camlboot implements a bootstrap for the OCaml
> compiler and

Missing double space after compiler.  Camlboot…


> +provides a bootstrapped equivalent to these files.
> +
> +It contains a compiler for a small subset of OCaml written in Guile Scheme,
> +an interpreter for OCaml written in that subset and a manually-written lexer
> +for OCaml.  These elements eliminate the need for the binary bootstrap in
> +OCaml and can effectively bootstrap OCaml 4.07.
> +
> +This package produces a native ocamlc and a bytecode ocamllex.")

Maybe again @code.


LGTM!

Thanks again!
Cheers,
simon