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[194.254.61.42]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id 129sm1059545wmz.26.2021.09.14.05.46.49 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 bits=256/256); Tue, 14 Sep 2021 05:46:49 -0700 (PDT) From: zimoun References: <2b1e7af8-40bc-1603-3cdf-e40dcaff9f98@riseup.net> <87y2aoll1r.fsf@gmail.com> <865yw3n4lv.fsf@gmail.com> Date: Tue, 14 Sep 2021 12:35:04 +0200 In-Reply-To: <865yw3n4lv.fsf@gmail.com> (zimoun's message of "Tue, 17 Aug 2021 23:28:12 +0200") Message-ID: <865yv3v413.fsf@gmail.com> User-Agent: Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) Emacs/27.1 (gnu/linux) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-BeenThere: bug-guix@gnu.org List-Id: Bug reports for GNU Guix List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Cc: 47630@debbugs.gnu.org Errors-To: bug-guix-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: "bug-Guix" X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=yhetil.org; s=key1; t=1631623977; h=from:from:sender:sender:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date: message-id:message-id:to:to:cc:cc:mime-version:mime-version: content-type:content-type:resent-cc:resent-from:resent-sender: resent-message-id:in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references: list-id:list-help:list-unsubscribe:list-subscribe:list-post: dkim-signature; bh=xcRQOTB6ip3SM9jy+HX7xoM/TLZRVeu12+hkfhtBstQ=; b=jZHx0grpzPgNtGcLGfuL4QBPWRa4CRHiQizGY232KKrMojO/7SPKqKIXe+Vdauih7bVfO7 5aw8j8ze5e1iETKaA871hRHUkTa/pBz1cYmgEnB+y6DgdJF6kQasSm6VPUxzVRkLJXN+LS NsuKvyd63qlwYThlWzr06aGqc4q4dA6fXlpeJoDZ1A+hx0XgnOIVzflmKs3sn5mkQHZNie /RkwQOQaEAPO5oycz7f7dtqfvuBNvU8Qhv9gJdM125M3UyZxi2rqJNXp4uh+9iuoC2MlUt 4Fglf2W0/adxM8u1PizjVx+XWr328Gjcd2ZfMzYskhOQZPPZn7rCdxD41ZRu3g== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=key1; d=yhetil.org; t=1631623977; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=lcFB2A4tcTS249DhyGi4xWNsPLOkyok1KQIbt73C+ScNFH+qNVYOWMXFNSRUkarCv9KrMk N8GEZPz8j+WB/VJjcndNCBAN5yPPWw8SXh9HRVP8bKOl7JhOKnDkzXhghv+kDhgmKq6owl LXP3OyQNs0pg3BxAlZoTk5sDbbO6wNOOm2WnjojuCL4JlJyi73dKfiSW0H9FuRbOF+0xuU 1aOVpLPfQaRnKTxHwXSvffJ0nSMpY5GPgZLlQDzhjVYPtvFjrOnQwe9oxBa659VDTLps7g VYwrfT5CvDKYmmpSneBCCYUJOFoomzOIWOyW2sTq8JXzRJw2kWDmG+mSqbutZA== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; aspmx1.migadu.com; dkim=fail ("headers rsa verify failed") header.d=gmail.com header.s=20210112 header.b=m41gNiUo; dmarc=fail reason="SPF not aligned (relaxed)" header.from=gmail.com (policy=none); spf=pass (aspmx1.migadu.com: domain of bug-guix-bounces@gnu.org designates 209.51.188.17 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=bug-guix-bounces@gnu.org X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -1.30 Authentication-Results: aspmx1.migadu.com; dkim=fail ("headers rsa verify failed") header.d=gmail.com header.s=20210112 header.b=m41gNiUo; dmarc=fail reason="SPF not aligned (relaxed)" header.from=gmail.com (policy=none); spf=pass (aspmx1.migadu.com: domain of bug-guix-bounces@gnu.org designates 209.51.188.17 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=bug-guix-bounces@gnu.org X-Migadu-Queue-Id: C042D1648A X-Spam-Score: -1.30 X-Migadu-Scanner: scn0.migadu.com X-TUID: qq9yepzlZJbW Hi, On Tue, 17 Aug 2021 at 23:28, zimoun wrote: > On Thu, 15 Jul 2021 at 12:56, bo0od wrote: >>> Could you propose a concrete wording solving >>> the issues you see >> >> Not really because english is not my mother tongue so there going to be errors >> in grammars, choosing of words..etc so better to be written by someone who has >> better english than me. >> >> But for the commands to go on step by step i can give that with little text >> and any webadmin can pick it up and arrange it accordingly. >> >> If guix documentation built on wikimedia it would be much easier because i can >> register and upload my changes and can be reviewed and updated, But using >> email for this is not the best way to achieve it but what to do.. > > Maybe you could provide what you find missing and where in the manual, > with little text. It should be a good start for pointing what and how > to improve. I plan to close this report if there is no concrete patch attached. Because personally I do not see what could be done. All the best, simon