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From: Cyril Roelandt <tipecaml@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 5/6 v2] gnu: Add gnome-desktop.
Date: Mon, 09 Dec 2013 01:06:33 +0100
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On 12/09/2013 12:57 AM, Ludovic Courtès wrote:
> Cyril Roelandt <tipecaml@gmail.com> skribis:
>
>> * gnu/packages/gnome.scm (gnome-desktop): New variable.
>
> [...]
>
>> +    (synopsis
>> +     "Libgnome-desktop, gnome-about and desktop-wide documents.")
>
> OK to push with this changed to:
>
>    "libgnome-desktop, gnome-about, and desktop-wide documents"
>

Should we really not capitalize the first letter of the first word of a 
sentence ? Are you strongly against the Oxford comma ? OK for the final dot.

Cyril.