From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: saffronsnail@hushmail.com Subject: bug#24851: Small Typo in Guix Documentation Date: Tue, 01 Nov 2016 10:20:55 -0700 Message-ID: <20161101172056.1259B200F7@smtp.hushmail.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="=_e1c24ef19b939f2455c80804f601651e" Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:60855) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1clB-00035k-OC for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 13:22:06 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1cl8-00077J-L6 for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 13:22:05 -0400 Received: from debbugs.gnu.org ([208.118.235.43]:52096) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.0:RSA_AES_128_CBC_SHA1:16) (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1cl8-00077D-I2 for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 13:22:02 -0400 Received: from Debian-debbugs by debbugs.gnu.org with local (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1c1cl8-0006lp-D4 for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 13:22:02 -0400 Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-Message-ID: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:60561) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1ckA-0002Dz-TQ for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 13:21:03 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1ck7-0006tc-Ny for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 13:21:02 -0400 Received: from smtp5.hushmail.com ([65.39.178.142]:43964) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.0:DHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:32) (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1ck7-0006t6-FF for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 13:20:59 -0400 Received: from smtp5.hushmail.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by smtp5.hushmail.com (Postfix) with SMTP id 50DD320203 for ; Tue, 1 Nov 2016 17:20:56 +0000 (UTC) Received: from smtp.hushmail.com (w6.hushmail.com [65.39.178.92]) by smtp5.hushmail.com (Postfix) with ESMTP for ; Tue, 1 Nov 2016 17:20:56 +0000 (UTC) List-Id: Bug reports for GNU Guix List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-guix-bounces+gcggb-bug-guix=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: "bug-Guix" To: 24851@debbugs.gnu.org --=_e1c24ef19b939f2455c80804f601651e Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Hello, I was reading Section 7.2.11 of the Guix manual and I noticed a small typo. In the second paragraph beneath the initrd example the sentence reads "The initial RAM disk produced by base-initrd honors several options passed on the Linux kernel command line (that is, arguments passed via the linux command of GRUB, or the -append option) of QEMU, notably:". I believe that the close parenthesis should come after "QEMU", not after "option". Thanks for your time,saff --=_e1c24ef19b939f2455c80804f601651e Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset="UTF-8" Hello,

I was reading Section 7.2.11 of the Guix manu= al and I noticed a small typo. In the second paragraph beneath the init= rd example the sentence reads "The initial RAM disk produced by base-initrd= honors several options passed on the Linux kernel command line (that is, a= rguments passed via the linux command of GRUB, or the -append option) of QE= MU, notably:". I believe that the close parenthesis should come after "QEMU= ", not after "option".

Thanks for your time,
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--=_e1c24ef19b939f2455c80804f601651e-- From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Leo Famulari Subject: bug#24851: Small Typo in Guix Documentation Date: Tue, 1 Nov 2016 15:06:58 -0400 Message-ID: <20161101190658.GB14310@jasmine> References: <20161101172056.1259B200F7@smtp.hushmail.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:48609) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1ePl-00043a-Ep for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 15:08:09 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1ePi-00070f-Aw for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 15:08:05 -0400 Received: from debbugs.gnu.org ([208.118.235.43]:52172) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.0:RSA_AES_128_CBC_SHA1:16) (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1ePi-00070a-3Q for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 15:08:02 -0400 Received: from Debian-debbugs by debbugs.gnu.org with local (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1c1ePh-0000nW-P9 for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 15:08:01 -0400 Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-Message-ID: Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20161101172056.1259B200F7@smtp.hushmail.com> List-Id: Bug reports for GNU Guix List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-guix-bounces+gcggb-bug-guix=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: "bug-Guix" To: saffronsnail@hushmail.com Cc: 24851@debbugs.gnu.org On Tue, Nov 01, 2016 at 10:20:55AM -0700, saffronsnail@hushmail.com wrote: > Hello, > I was reading Section 7.2.11 of the Guix manual and I noticed a small > typo. In the second paragraph beneath the initrd example the sentence > reads "The initial RAM disk produced by base-initrd honors several > options passed on the Linux kernel command line (that is, arguments > passed via the linux command of GRUB, or the -append option) of QEMU, > notably:". I believe that the close parenthesis should come after > "QEMU", not after "option". > Thanks for your time,saff Hm, I'm not sure exactly which meaning is intended here. Does anyone have advice? Andreas, you made this change in 1068f26b7. From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: ludo@gnu.org (Ludovic =?UTF-8?Q?Court=C3=A8s?=) Subject: bug#24851: Small Typo in Guix Documentation Date: Tue, 01 Nov 2016 22:11:43 +0100 Message-ID: <87pomenbw0.fsf@gnu.org> References: <20161101172056.1259B200F7@smtp.hushmail.com> <20161101190658.GB14310@jasmine> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Return-path: Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:33832) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1gMj-0003Ms-Ol for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 17:13:07 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1gMg-0006Le-K5 for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 17:13:05 -0400 Received: from debbugs.gnu.org ([208.118.235.43]:52320) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.0:RSA_AES_128_CBC_SHA1:16) (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1c1gMg-0006LU-Gq for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 17:13:02 -0400 Received: from Debian-debbugs by debbugs.gnu.org with local (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1c1gMg-0005i5-CA for bug-guix@gnu.org; Tue, 01 Nov 2016 17:13:02 -0400 Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-To: bug-guix@gnu.org Resent-Message-ID: In-Reply-To: <20161101190658.GB14310@jasmine> (Leo Famulari's message of "Tue, 1 Nov 2016 15:06:58 -0400") List-Id: Bug reports for GNU Guix List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-guix-bounces+gcggb-bug-guix=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sender: "bug-Guix" To: saffronsnail@hushmail.com Cc: 24851-done@debbugs.gnu.org Leo Famulari skribis: > On Tue, Nov 01, 2016 at 10:20:55AM -0700, saffronsnail@hushmail.com wrote: >> Hello,=20 >> I was reading Section 7.2.11 of the Guix manual and I noticed a small >> typo. In the second paragraph beneath the initrd example the sentence >> reads "The initial RAM disk produced by base-initrd honors several >> options passed on the Linux kernel command line (that is, arguments >> passed via the linux command of GRUB, or the -append option) of QEMU, >> notably:". I believe that the close parenthesis should come after >> "QEMU", not after "option". You are right, I=E2=80=99ll push a fix shortly, thanks! Ludo=E2=80=99.