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Date: Sun, 28 Feb 2016 15:29:57 +0100
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On Sun, Feb 28, 2016 at 12:10:09PM +0200, Efraim Flashner wrote:
> +    (synopsis "distributed IRC client")

Start with a capital letter (this should be found by "guix lint").

> +    (description "Quassel is a modern, cross-platform, distributed IRC client,
> +meaning that one or more clients can attach to and detach from the central core.

I would drop the marketing term "modern".

> +It's much like the popular combination of screen and a text-based IRC client
> +such as WeeChat or irssi, but graphical.")

"It's" -> "It is"; better: "It resembles"?

I assume that everything builds for you and did not check the licenses...

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