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From: Andreas Enge <andreas@enge.fr>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] doc: Fix minor typos and add missing words.
Date: Tue, 23 Feb 2016 10:21:31 +0100
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To: Alex Kost <alezost@gmail.com>
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On Tue, Feb 23, 2016 at 10:53:57AM +0300, Alex Kost wrote:
> I would rather write: "The @code{(gnu services shepherd)} module ..."
> But I don't know if it's preferable or not, other opinions are needed.
> The rest fixes look good to me.

I will have a look at the documentation again next weekend (at the latest)
and can integrate this suggestion, as well as other pending ones.

Andreas