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From: Andreas Enge <andreas@enge.fr>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 4/5] gnu: Add emotion-generic-players
Date: Thu, 26 Feb 2015 11:23:27 +0100
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Hello,

just a quick comment on the descriptions. It would be good to write full 
sentences, for instance:

On Thu, Feb 26, 2015 at 01:31:12AM +0100, Tomáš Čech wrote:
> +     "Set of generic media players allowing to open video files through emotion. Useful only for emotion library based applications.")

"Emotion Generic Players provides/consists of/is a set of generic ...
It is useful only for ...".

I think it would also be good to expand a bit where possible, and to introduce
the word "enlightenment" in each of these packages (by replacing "EFL" with
"Enlightenment Foundation Libraries", for instance, or adding a sentence like
"It is part of the Enlightenment desktop environment").

Maybe call the file enlightenment.scm?

Andreas