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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: guix-devel-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN X-Migadu-Country: US X-Spam-Score: -8.60 X-Migadu-Queue-Id: 080446CB69 X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -8.60 X-Migadu-Scanner: mx10.migadu.com X-TUID: m+MDz+0a8MGj ---- On Tue, 16 Apr 2024 08:43:23 +0200 pelzflorian (Florian Pelz) wrote= ---=20 > Hi Matt. When triple checking, I read in =E2=80=9Cinfo "(texinfo)@pxref= "=E2=80=9D: >=20 > In past versions of Texinfo, it was not allowed to write punctuation > after a '@pxref', so it could be used _only_ before a right parenthesis. > This is no longer the case. The effect of '@pxref{NODE-NAME}' is > similar to that of 'see @ref{NODE-NAME}'. However, in many circumstance > the latter is preferrable, as this makes it clear in the Info output > that the word "see" should be present. >=20 > Because of this last sentence, my tendency would now be to use @pxref > only for parentheses. (Texinfo is really confusing.) Should I just cut > these changes: >=20 > (Linux Services): Use @pxref to start phrase. > (Configuring the Shell): Use @pxref to start phrase. Yes, I agree that cutting those, and using the original "see @ref{}", is wh= at the Texinfo manual says is correct. We should also cut this change: (Setting Up the Daemon): use @xref to start sentence. The original was also correct. The only change that should remain is: (Build Systems): capitalize "python" and start parenthesized reference with @pxref. Thanks for checking that. I had it wrong and I learned something!