Hello Nicolas,

Thanks for the pointers.  Attached is an updated patch.

Ryan


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On Monday, May 11, 2020 3:10 AM, Nicolas Goaziou <mail@nicolasgoaziou.fr> wrote:

> Hello,
>
> rdes via Guix-patches via guix-patches@gnu.org writes:
>
> > The attached patch adds the emacs-interleave package.
>
> Thank you! Some comments follow.
>
> > Subject: [PATCH] gnu: Add emacs-interleave
>
> Your commit message should conform to Guix rules. Here, you need to add
>
> -   gnu/packages/emacs-xyz.scm (emacs-interleave): New variable.
>
> > +(define-public emacs-interleave
> > +(package
>
> Indentation seems wrong.
>
> > -   (name "emacs-interleave")
> > -   (version "20191129.958")
> > -   (source
> > -   (origin
> > -        (method url-fetch)
> >
> >
> > -        (uri (string-append
> >
> >
> > -               "https://melpa.org/packages/interleave-"
> >
> >
> > -               version
> >
> >
> > -               ".el"))
> >
> >
>
> We do not use MELPA sources. Instead, you could use `git-fetch' and
> extract the latest stable release from here:
>
> https://github.com/rudolfochrist/interleave/releases
>
> > -        (sha256
> >
> >
> > -          (base32
> >
> >
> > -            "0y183ggfmkjjywbcqgyinmr21hsg2vaw4d52bg1gsxbp673za2m8"))))
> >
> >
>
> Nitpick: could you move the string on the same line as `base32'?
>
> > -   (build-system emacs-build-system)
> > -   (home-page
> > -   "https://github.com/rudolfochrist/interleave")
>
> Ditto. Could you move the string on the line above?
>
> > -   (synopsis "Interleaving text books since 2015")
>
> I think this synopsis needs to be reworded. As it is, it may not be
> useful.
>
> > -   (description
> > -   "Interleave presents your PDF side by side to an [[http://orgmode.org][Org Mode]]
>
> Description uses Texinfo syntax, not Org syntax. In this case, however,
> I think "side by side to an Org buffer" is sufficient.
>
> > +buffer with your notes, narrowing down to just those passages that are relevant to
> > +the particular page in the document viewer.
> > +")
>
> You don't need to end the description with a final newline. It would be
> nice to expound it a bit. For example, it could be interesting to know
> this is a minor mode.
>
> Don't forget to add a copyright line with your name at the top of the file.
>
> Could you send an updated patch?
>
> Regards,
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Nicolas Goaziou