On Wed, Sep 16, 2020 at 4:04 PM Nicolas Goaziou <mail@nicolasgoaziou.fr> wrote:
Hello,

Jesse Dowell <jesse.dowell@gmail.com> writes:

> I'm hoping the following patch can be useful for others. It's a package for
> emacs-html-to-hiccup which can be very handy when working with clojure
> programs that use hiccup syntax.

Thank you.

Could you send the patch with "git format-patch" or "git send-email" ?
>
> --8<---------------cut here---------------start------------->8---
> diff --git a/gnu/packages/emacs-xyz.scm b/gnu/packages/emacs-xyz.scm
> index ff043463cc..253e51a79c 100644
> --- a/gnu/packages/emacs-xyz.scm
> +++ b/gnu/packages/emacs-xyz.scm
> @@ -24550,4 +24550,29 @@ publically-accessible HTTP server.")
>  label references and citations in LaTeX.  It is based on RefTeX, which is
>  included with Emacs.")
>      (license license:gpl3+)))
> +
> +(define-public emacs-html-to-hiccup
> +  (let ((commit "50a52e2b0d13d865187acdf775b8203d5003f2f1")
> +        (revision "0"))

Could you add a comment explaining why we provide a non-released version
(here because there is no release anyway).
> +    (package
> +      (name "emacs-html-to-hiccup")
> +      (version (git-version "20190909" revision commit))

It should be version "1.0" according to keyword in main file.
> +      (source
> +       (origin
> +         (method git-fetch)
> +         (uri (git-reference
> +               (url "https://github.com/plexus/html-to-hiccup")
> +               (commit commit)))
> +         (file-name (git-file-name name version))
> +         (sha256
> +          (base32
> "1qi092mw2n08v6yr0j6hlpx0pnlcnhxjqbsrlw9pn4yin6zk91yp"))))

Could you move the string on the line above ?

> +      (build-system emacs-build-system)
> +      (propagated-inputs
> +     `(("dash" ,emacs-dash)
> +       ("s" ,emacs-s)))

There is an indentation issue here.

> +      (home-page "https://github.com/plexus/html-to-hiccup")
> +      (synopsis "Emacs package that turns HTML into Hiccup syntax")

It could be

  "Turn HTML into Hiccup syntax"

> +      (description
> +       "Emacs package that turns HTML into Hiccup syntax, a notation
> popular
> +when doing Clojure/ClojureScript web development.")

The description should be comprised of full sentences. Calling "guix
lint" on your definition should report it. Here, it could be:

   This Emacs package turns HTML...

> +      (license license:mpl2.0))))

LICENSE file is mpl2.0, but the Elisp library has GPL3+ headers. Maybe
you should add a comment about it.

Could you send an updated patch?

Regards,
--
Nicolas Goaziou

Thanks for the feedback. I've attached a patch that incorporates all of your suggestions.

Best,
Jesse