From: Maxime Devos <maximedevos@telenet.be>
To: Xinglu Chen <public@yoctocell.xyz>, 48667@debbugs.gnu.org
Cc: "Ludovic Courtès" <ludo@gnu.org>
Subject: [bug#48667] [PATCH] doc: Add reference for ‘git-ver
Date: Sun, 06 Jun 2021 11:48:25 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <990f6b1bf7bcd9e78f212b8615e0201c48a81b2f.camel@telenet.be> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <539a1a894dbbe25d5370b7bfb11006f736cbc875.1622971088.git.public@yoctocell.xyz>
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Xinglu Chen schreef op zo 06-06-2021 om 11:19 [+0200]:
> +@deffn {Scheme Procedure} git-version @var{VERSION} @var{REVISION} @var{COMMIT}
> +Return the version string for packages using @code{git-fetch}.
> +
> +@lisp
> +(git-version "0.2.3" "0" "93818c936ee7e2f1ba1b315578bde363a7d43d05")
> +@result{} "0.2.3-0.93818c9"
> +@end lisp
> +@end deffn
> +
> +@deffn {Scheme Procedure} hg-version @var{VERSION} @var{REVISION} @var{CHANGESET}
> +Return the version string for packages using @code{hg-fetch}. It works
> +in the same was @code{git-version}
> +@end deffn
Linguistic nitpick: about ‘It works in the same was @code{git-version}’: ‘in the same was’
seems ungrammatical to me. Should this have been something like
It works in the same way as @code{git-version}.
? (Remember to include the period.)
LGTM otherwise.
Greetings,
Maxime.
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next prev parent reply other threads:[~2021-06-06 9:49 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 11+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2021-05-26 9:00 [bug#48667] [PATCH] doc: Expound on how to specify the version of a package Xinglu Chen
2021-05-26 13:06 ` Nicolas Goaziou
2021-05-26 14:07 ` Xinglu Chen
2021-05-26 14:57 ` Xinglu Chen
2021-06-05 20:29 ` Ludovic Courtès
2021-06-06 9:09 ` Xinglu Chen
2021-06-06 9:19 ` [bug#48667] [PATCH] doc: Add reference for ‘git-ver Xinglu Chen
2021-06-06 9:48 ` Maxime Devos [this message]
2021-06-06 10:33 ` Xinglu Chen
2021-06-06 10:37 ` [bug#48667] [PATCH v2] doc: Add refernece for ‘git-version’ and ‘hg-version’ Xinglu Chen
2021-06-06 12:36 ` bug#48667: " Ludovic Courtès
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