Hi Maxim,

Thank you very much for the review!

And sorry for the delay: day job :D


Maxim Cournoyer <maxim.cournoyer@gmail.com> [2023-01-16T17:56:51+0100]:
> Hi Sergiu,
>
> Sergiu Ivanov <sivanov@colimite.fr> writes:
>
>>>From e0c69ddefe7367e4b4417db70c86eacbfc6e3eae Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
>> From: Sergiu Ivanov <sivanov@colimite.fr>
>> Date: Sun, 4 Dec 2022 13:27:13 +0100
>> Subject: [PATCH 1/3] gnu: volctl: Make the synopsis line shorter.
>>
>> * gnu/packages/gtk.scm (volctl): Make the synopsis line shorter.
>
> I'd reword this as "Re-indent the synopsis line", or alternatively make
> it really shorter, perhaps dropping the last "for graphical
> applications" bit, which get repeated the description anyway.

I chose the second option and made the synopsis shorter as you suggest.

>>  gnu/packages/gtk.scm | 4 +++-
>>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
>>
>> diff --git a/gnu/packages/gtk.scm b/gnu/packages/gtk.scm
>> index de82b9e55f..c8ae855cfa 100644
>> --- a/gnu/packages/gtk.scm
>> +++ b/gnu/packages/gtk.scm
>> @@ -33,6 +33,7 @@
>>  ;;; Copyright © 2022 Benjamin Slade <slade@lambda-y.net>
>>  ;;; Copyright © 2022 Denis 'GNUtoo' Carikli <GNUtoo@cyberdimension.org>
>>  ;;; Copyright © 2022 Petr Hodina <phodina@protonmail.com>
>> +;;; Copyright © 2022 Sergiu Ivanov <sivanov@colimite.fr>
>
> When changes are not substantial (< 10 new additions/changes) they are
> not protected by copyright, so you can drop the above hunk.

Ah, good know!  I dropped the hunk.

-
Sergiu